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[Pippa] {part 1/3} "dance"

Jan 02, 2012 23:19

{part 1/3} "dance"
R for mature themes (probably. There are drugs.); AU!!; Yamamoto Ryota, Takahashi Ryu, etc.
For myxstorie - happy friendiversary, cakeface 8D This is a working title and the story itself is unfinished; as the title suggests this is the first part and there will be two more instalments to arrive at a later date. I wasn't going to post this ( Read more... )

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kira_shadow January 2 2012, 23:55:00 UTC

what a beginning!
I like the dystopia setting and the escape and just the whole atmosphere you created. shall look forward to reading the other parts :D

especially liked yara's cat-claw blades ^_^

gnn...sure I had more to say but my brain is shutting down ._.

crazy_otaku911 January 3 2012, 00:36:04 UTC

SHRIEKS AND FLAILS EVERYWHERE OMG YARAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA T_T SLDFJ :SLDKFJ HOW IS HE SO COOL AND AWESOME AND OMG YARAYARAYARAYARAYARAYARAYARALDSFJ :SLDKFJ

♥ YamaRyoooo, you got spirit. And Ryuuuuu \o/ Spunk and snerk, omg, I am so in loveeeeee. *flails everywhere* Ugh, want more. ;; You know that, of course, but OMGGGGGGLSDKFJ :SLDKJF

mousapelli January 3 2012, 01:45:20 UTC

wah yaraaaaaaaaaaaaaa

of course he comes to save them ♥ plus MAGIC POWERS. awesome ♥ Can't wait to see more!

nudrive January 3 2012, 21:51:17 UTC

%^&* I LOVE YOUR VERSION OF RYU
I ALWAYS DO

AND YARAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA <333333
HERE TO SAVE THE DAY :DDDDD

myxstorie February 16 2012, 10:51:41 UTC

R for mature themes (probably. There are drugs.); AU!!
Oh my God I love this already

And that first paragraph. Omg. That's gorgeous *_* Your writing is so beautiful ♥

This world is so intriguing~ What are the stories about 'after registration' ;dfkl;dks;dlk so interesting

staggering and reaching out instinctively as he veered toward the edge of the roof.
O_O

“They've all gone to Memory Time instead.”
Ooooooohhhh

These days it was far more common for Grovirians to take hits and wrap themselves in their happiest memories than bother with the cold, grey streets of a city that was no longer truly home.
It was then that Yamamoto realised there was no other noise; all talk, all the hubbub of registration suddenly ceased to exist.
omg

s;lkfd;dskfsdaka;skfsdalk

"Damn," the figure said, staring out across the square. "It really is just the two of you. I was convinced Maachin was wrong."
AAHHHHHH SALDFJLKDLLSDKDSJ

These people were all lost in Memory Time, with no hope of return.
oh my god ._.

Jutting from his gloves near the ( ... )

yararanger February 16 2012, 11:02:55 UTC

omg I almost forgot how much I kind of really beat Yara up in this @-@;; I'm sorry, kiddo ;A; UGH I WANT TO WRITE MORE OF THIS /RIGHT NOW/ INSTEAD OF MY ASSIGNMENTS, FUCK YOU VIRGINIA WOOLF

but

I'm so, so, so, so, so happy you finally had the chance to read this ;______________; Like, just... yeah. *clinghug* (._.)

myxstorie February 16 2012, 11:04:14 UTC

YOU ARE SO MEAN. But it's totally awesome too, oh my heart ;_;

;lsfsl;dk me too, seriously, so glad ;_; ♥ *smooshes* ilu ne ._.