[Pippa] {part 1/3} "dance"

[yararanger]

{part 1/3} "dance"
R for mature themes (probably. There are drugs.); AU!!; Yamamoto Ryota, Takahashi Ryu, etc.
For myxstorie - happy friendiversary, cakeface 8D This is a working title and the story itself is unfinished; as the title suggests this is the first part and there will be two more instalments to arrive at a later date. I wasn't going to post this

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[myxstorie]

R for mature themes (probably. There are drugs.); AU!!
Oh my God I love this already

And that first paragraph. Omg. That's gorgeous *_* Your writing is so beautiful ♥

This world is so intriguing~ What are the stories about 'after registration' ;dfkl;dks;dlk so interesting

staggering and reaching out instinctively as he veered toward the edge of the roof.
O_O

“They've all gone to Memory Time instead.”
Ooooooohhhh

These days it was far more common for Grovirians to take hits and wrap themselves in their happiest memories than bother with the cold, grey streets of a city that was no longer truly home.
It was then that Yamamoto realised there was no other noise; all talk, all the hubbub of registration suddenly ceased to exist.
omg

s;lkfd;dskfsdaka;skfsdalk

"Damn," the figure said, staring out across the square. "It really is just the two of you. I was convinced Maachin was wrong."
AAHHHHHH SALDFJLKDLLSDKDSJ

These people were all lost in Memory Time, with no hope of return.
oh my god ._.

Jutting from his gloves near the knuckles were four long, thin blades, their edges sharp and wicked, like cats' claws.
GDHFHGKJLKJKGFDSGL;LKFGHSFDSK;';'LKGFFSFDSA

;lkd;KL; THIS IS SO COOL BUT LSKF;LASK;LDSK ;____; the stranger's face was now frighteningly pale and sweat soaked dark patches on his shirt.

It drains you, this city. You'll feel better too, just wait.
oooooooooooooooooooooooooooohhhh

“Don't stop, you moron,” Takahashi said, struggling to drag a blue-lipped Yara forward
omggg Yara ;_;

ohhh myyyy godddf ;dfks;dfksd;lsd;kds;lk THIS IS AMAZING. I mean, it's YOU so I knew it was going to be awesome but IT'S SO MUCH BETTER THAN EVEN I COULD IMAGINE ;A; I love dystopian sideas SO MUCH and THIS ONE HAS YARA AND RYOTA AND RYU and ljadffklkldfj I love the whole mystery surrounding registration, and how the Crown has taken people and turned them into their own personal network system and the stuff with the drug and s;ldfkasfdk;sdlk EVERYTHING. WHERE ARE THEY GOING. WHAT ELSE CAN YARA DO. HE'S SO BRILLIANT OMG (how could I have expected anything less ;A;)

omg seriously I love this more than words. JUST TAKE MY HEART. HAVE IT. THANK YOU SO MUCH, I don't deserve anything even a fraction as amazing as this, you are the most awesome best friend in the entire world ;A; ♥

[yararanger]

omg I almost forgot how much I kind of really beat Yara up in this @-@;; I'm sorry, kiddo ;A; UGH I WANT TO WRITE MORE OF THIS /RIGHT NOW/ INSTEAD OF MY ASSIGNMENTS, FUCK YOU VIRGINIA WOOLF

but

I'm so, so, so, so, so happy you finally had the chance to read this ;______________; Like, just... yeah. *clinghug* (._.)

[myxstorie]

YOU ARE SO MEAN. But it's totally awesome too, oh my heart ;_;

;lsfsl;dk me too, seriously, so glad ;_; ♥ *smooshes* ilu ne ._.