Comments | janie_tangerine: fic, Lost: take it in and hold your breath (Miles/Richard), PG13

janie_tangerine

fic, Lost: take it in and hold your breath (Miles/Richard), PG13

Sep 15, 2010 19:10

Title: take it in and hold your breath
Pairing: Miles/Richard
Rating: PG13
Words: 846
Spoilers: up until the S6 finale.
Warnings: well, there's smoking going on, if it's one.
Summary: The first time Richard smoked a cigarette, he coughed for a good five minutes after bringing it to his lips twice.
A/N: originally written for bittersweet25 at the five acts ( Read more... )

character: richard alpert, character: miles straume, fanfiction:lost, pairing: miles/richard

Comments 5

pann_cake September 19 2010, 23:54:45 UTC

OMG, I loved this. I am not a fan of smoking, but I gotta admit, the sharing thing was kinda hot and cute. I can totally picture them doing it. :P

I loved Richard's reason for smoking, and that he has exactly 5 every day. So Richard. And I like the slow progression of their relationship, and the accidental kissing at the end.

Eeeeee I love these two so much. :DD

P.S. Bon Joviiiiii!! <3

janie_tangerine September 20 2010, 00:06:59 UTC

Thank you! :DD

Well, to be entirely honest, I hate smoking. I might find the whole thing sexy/romantic/very film noir in movies/shows, but in RL I can't stand it. But it was fun writing this one, and I could so see Richard getting addicted to it for some reason. I'm so glad that you liked it and that it was IC for you. :DD And heee, they're adorable, aren't they?

BON JOVI ARE AMAZING. TRUE FACT. ;)

pann_cake September 20 2010, 00:28:55 UTC

I agree, smoking IRL is a huge turn-off for me (I have asthma), but I can see the appeal in movies/fiction or whatever. And Miles strikes me as the smoking type anyway. I've seen other fic writers make him a smoker, and it always fits so well with his personality. And Richard, too, certainly needs his vices after such a long life of Doing The Right Thing. :P

I've seen Bon Jovi many many times in concert...and Jon looks sexy every year. ;D

janie_tangerine September 20 2010, 11:15:51 UTC

Dude NOW I'M ENVIOUS. I've been trying to go see BJ for ages but they never show up in my goddamn country (Italy) and I never managed :(((( next year I'll just fly to Germany lol.

Lol it's totally a question of fictional appeal and total RL turn off, y/y? And yeah, I think that Miles has the skills for pulling smoking off. ;) Also ehe, Richard does need vices. Poor guy. XD

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