fic, Lost: take it in and hold your breath (Miles/Richard), PG13

[janie_tangerine]

Title: take it in and hold your breath
Pairing: Miles/Richard
Rating: PG13
Words: 846
Spoilers: up until the S6 finale.
Warnings: well, there's smoking going on, if it's one.
Summary: The first time Richard smoked a cigarette, he coughed for a good five minutes after bringing it to his lips twice.
A/N: originally written for bittersweet25 at the five acts

Comments

[pann_cake]

OMG, I loved this. I am not a fan of smoking, but I gotta admit, the sharing thing was kinda hot and cute. I can totally picture them doing it. :P

I loved Richard's reason for smoking, and that he has exactly 5 every day. So Richard. And I like the slow progression of their relationship, and the accidental kissing at the end.

Eeeeee I love these two so much. :DD

P.S. Bon Joviiiiii!! <3

[janie_tangerine]

Thank you! :DD

Well, to be entirely honest, I hate smoking. I might find the whole thing sexy/romantic/very film noir in movies/shows, but in RL I can't stand it. But it was fun writing this one, and I could so see Richard getting addicted to it for some reason. I'm so glad that you liked it and that it was IC for you. :DD And heee, they're adorable, aren't they?

BON JOVI ARE AMAZING. TRUE FACT. ;)

[pann_cake]

I agree, smoking IRL is a huge turn-off for me (I have asthma), but I can see the appeal in movies/fiction or whatever. And Miles strikes me as the smoking type anyway. I've seen other fic writers make him a smoker, and it always fits so well with his personality. And Richard, too, certainly needs his vices after such a long life of Doing The Right Thing. :P

I've seen Bon Jovi many many times in concert...and Jon looks sexy every year. ;D

[janie_tangerine]

Dude NOW I'M ENVIOUS. I've been trying to go see BJ for ages but they never show up in my goddamn country (Italy) and I never managed :(((( next year I'll just fly to Germany lol.

Lol it's totally a question of fictional appeal and total RL turn off, y/y? And yeah, I think that Miles has the skills for pulling smoking off. ;) Also ehe, Richard does need vices. Poor guy. XD

[pann_cake]

LOL you poor thing, deprived of our dear Jonny. They play here (New York) almost every year. Some years they even stop twice on the same tour (different venue). You haven't lived until you hear "Bad Medicine" live. :P