Short fic and I blame vlredreign

Sep 30, 2006 00:21

So this is vlredreign's fault, cuz she caught me on a Friday night on my return home from working all day and no good tv to melt me brain with. So this would have to do ( Read more... )

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vlredreign September 30 2006, 04:49:40 UTC
I say again, I so love you!!!! I know you said you weren't writing in the fandom much, so this is a gift. One much appreciated.

And it was too funny, and Brian soooo loves Justin. He gave up wallowing in his hangover to save his Sunshine!!! And then they gang up on Ethan!!! My cup runneth over!

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jane2005 September 30 2006, 05:05:04 UTC
And it was too funny, and Brian soooo loves Justin. He gave up wallowing in his hangover to save his Sunshine!!! And then they gang up on Ethan!!! My cup runneth over!

Yeah, after I'd defended the chin-rat man on qaf_retread. I couldn't help it, I really was in the mood for a good Kinney-snark.

Plus, you know, "Ode to Sunshine" inspired my first fic - and rereading that tonight (supposedly as a bedtime story, oops), I just had to write another "Ethan's kind of a silly character anyway" story.

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_alicesprings September 30 2006, 06:02:08 UTC
Yeah, what she said.

OMG JANE WROTE NEW FIC!!! *faints*

Keep it up :)

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vlredreign September 30 2006, 06:10:29 UTC
See?? Being the company pest and all around PIA can be a good thing, huh?

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The Princess Strikes Again fansee September 30 2006, 04:54:43 UTC
Lovely bedtime story. Many thanks. FanSee

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Re: The Princess Strikes Again jane2005 September 30 2006, 05:05:40 UTC
welcome!

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epicallytired September 30 2006, 05:03:25 UTC

“Shut up!” Brian and Justin barked in stereo, too intent on glaring at each other to consider courtesy.

that just killed me. i laughed. the idea of them just once again being so sucked ionto their own bullshit and operating as a single entity, ignoring ethan...LOVE...LOVE IT.

it was adorable.

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jane2005 September 30 2006, 05:10:47 UTC
Cool! So that came across.

Plus, the part where Justin accepts the bottle at the end? Yeah. Baby steps. You KNOW he's ending up sleeping with Brian that night.

First, Brian would so drive him back to the loft, cuz the other inhalers are there and who knows if he would have a relapse? Then, Justin would be all, "I'm sleeping on the couch!" and Brian would be, "sure, but if you stop breathing in the middle of the night I'm not responsible," and Justin would be all, "Yeah, that's true." And the next thing you know he'd be welcoming Brian home with open legs! And then all, "OMG I cheated on Ian!" And Brian would be all, "But since we were never together we never broke up so you're really cheating on me" and Justin would say, "But... but..." and Brian would be all "see how silly thinking that way is? what say you shut up and we fuck again?" and Justin would reluctantly agree.

Did I tell you I picked up drinking caffeine again?

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epicallytired September 30 2006, 05:13:52 UTC
i think i like you on caffine. i never say this to authors but i totally think a second chapter/sequal in which that stuff happens would be a good read.

yeah it totally came across that ethan was an afterthough, an annoying fly buzzing about as brian and justin continued their bickering complicated twisted thing that they have.

yes, the allergy attack is a plot contrievance (sp?) but hell, so was ethan so it's all okay.

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jane2005 September 30 2006, 05:22:27 UTC
i totally think a second chapter/sequal in which that stuff happens would be a good read

Hey! You want to write it? If anyone wants to write it, I'd be fine with that.

yes, the allergy attack is a plot contrievance (sp?) but hell, so was ethan so it's all okay.

yeah, that was pretty much my discussion with vlredreign. Ethan was an excuse to expound on Brian/Justin, not really written well as a character at all.

As opposed to this. Heh.

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jillapet September 30 2006, 05:48:57 UTC
MWAAAHHAAA!!!

I've so been there...adrenaline + Albuterol+Brian + Ian =a really pissed off Sunshine...

So glad you wrote for us!

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jane2005 September 30 2006, 12:53:54 UTC
So glad you wrote for us!

You're welcome!

You will now bring me Justin's first born fic in which Brian repudiates his whore-of-Babylon status and impregnates the sunshine and settles down into married life in New York... oh, wait.

I think that's actually been written. Seriously, I was kidding.

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suzvoy September 30 2006, 08:33:04 UTC
And I have nothing to offer you but a 4am… wait! it isn’t a booty call! Oh my god, it’s a medicine run!

BWAHAHAHAHA!

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jane2005 September 30 2006, 12:55:36 UTC
WHY ARE YOU READING THIS!!

Go! Write! Hee hee hee I can say that now, mwahahaha...

And, yeah. Would have served Justin right if Brian had told Ian to go to hell and just stayed home with the panties.

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suzvoy September 30 2006, 18:07:59 UTC
WHY ARE YOU READING THIS!!

IT'S B/J FIC.

Go! Write! Hee hee hee I can say that now, mwahahaha...

Thhhhhhp. ;p

And, yeah. Would have served Justin right if Brian had told Ian to go to hell and just stayed home with the panties.

But of course Brian can't do that, because HE LOVES JUSTY-WUSTY SO MUCH.

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