Ok first of all, props to the song "Butterfly". It totally takes me back to my elementary days of radio, haha.
This chapter was just beautiful. I WISH that GL had thought to have Coop come back as a ghost for Ashlee or even Buzz or Daisy. That part was so sweet and poignant. It was just wonderful. I can't wait to see what happens next. **hugs**
It totally takes me back to my elementary days of radio, haha.
Oy vey, now I feel really old. *laughing* This song was definitely not from my elementary school days. *laughing*
Coop needs to come back as a ghost so that everyone (that was important to him- meaning the Coopers and Ashlee, not toe tag witch) can have closure. His death bed scenes were weak and didn't bring anything to anyone. I'm so glad you liked the chapter, Alexica. Thank you so much for the love. **hugs** You rock.
*thinking* Okay. *grin* It's fine with age comes experience. And some interesting musical choices. **hugs**
Coop's death scenes were weak and unfortunately more about Beth/Alan than about Coop. Well except for Buzz's scenes, but even those lost something because instead of using the real footage of Buzz and Jenna when he found out about Coop, the IIC remade them. *sigh* GL sucks.
You are brilliant. There are no words to describe how amazing this chapter was. The scene between her and "Coop" was just magic. I'm sitting here wiping tears from my face and wondering why I haven't found you in the bookstore yet. You not only write a wonderfully captivating story, but you take the crap GL handed us and are able to create a story using that crap and turn it into something amazing, heart touching and yet so true to the real characters. I hope everyone who reads this chapter will take the time to comment. Such a small thing to do for what we receive in return. I can't say it enough, this was truly awesome. luv and hugs, Tray
*blushes* Wow. Um, I don't know about being brilliant, but this comment has made me blush and grin like a fool. *grin* I'm so glad that you enjoyed this chapter that much. One of the problems--okay one of the MANY problems-- I have with Guiding Light is that the death bed scenes didn't bring any closure for our couple and his funeral was woefully underwhelming. I just can't believe Ashlee would be able to move on- especially with Rocky- without Coop telling her that it was okay and that he understood. Thank you so much for all your kind words. **hugs** You are the best, Tray! **hugs again**
Awww... now I miss Coop. I was totally Team Rocky too, now I'm like, can't you just bring back zombie Coop instead. *laughing* I really love that Coop wants her to move on and be happy, because I know he would want that and I doubt Ashlee could let herself love Rocky without somehow knowing that Coop would be okay with it.
Okay that would be an interesting (and extremely funny- at least to me) triangle. Coop's twin Rocky/Ashlee/Dead!Zombie!Coop. *laughing* That makes me giggle just thinking about it. I might have to write a crack!fic with that idea. *grin* Yeah I really don't believe Real!Ashlee (not Pod!Ashlee) would be able to fall in love with Rocky without Coop's blessing. She would have so much guilt over that. ***hugs*** Thank you for the love.
Every story I read of yours I think is your best until I read the next one. You have so much talent. I feel very fortunate to have you share all of your wonderful stories with us. Your writing draws me into the story and the story just comes alive and when I get to the end I am already anxious for the next chapter. I love that Coop gave Ashlee his blessing for her and Rocky.
Aww, Dawn thank you so much for your kind words. This comment means so much and I really can't express how much because I know I don't have the words. **hugs** I'm so happy that you like this chapter and story that much. I really believe that Coop had to give her his blessing before she could move on at all. *grin* But that doesn't mean that's the last we will see of Coop. *grin*
I think Coop needs to come back as a ghost for closure too, since Cooplee didn't get any and to haunt Beth until she injures herself and dies a painful death... um, did I say that out loud? I meant so that everyone can move on. *laughing* Thank you so much for the sweet words. **hugs** It means the world to me.
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This chapter was just beautiful. I WISH that GL had thought to have Coop come back as a ghost for Ashlee or even Buzz or Daisy. That part was so sweet and poignant. It was just wonderful. I can't wait to see what happens next. **hugs**
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Oy vey, now I feel really old. *laughing* This song was definitely not from my elementary school days. *laughing*
Coop needs to come back as a ghost so that everyone (that was important to him- meaning the Coopers and Ashlee, not toe tag witch) can have closure. His death bed scenes were weak and didn't bring anything to anyone. I'm so glad you liked the chapter, Alexica. Thank you so much for the love. **hugs** You rock.
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I so agree with you though. No closure at all for any of his family really on GL, it definitely could have been A LOT better!
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Coop's death scenes were weak and unfortunately more about Beth/Alan than about Coop. Well except for Buzz's scenes, but even those lost something because instead of using the real footage of Buzz and Jenna when he found out about Coop, the IIC remade them. *sigh* GL sucks.
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Your writing draws me into the story and the story just comes alive and when I get to the end I am already anxious for the next chapter.
I love that Coop gave Ashlee his blessing for her and Rocky.
*double hugs*
Dawn
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This is what I'd like to see on the show....Coop coming back as a ghost to give the pair proper closure.
Another amazing chapter! Nice work hun!! =)
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