So Much Mine: Section Thirteen

[wedspawn]

Section Thirteen

Pairing: JaeHo
Rating: Overall NC-17
All my Yoosu belongs to: Ranalore
Summary: The beginning of a shifting relationship. Hot Korean boys. Sex. Dancing and some angry words. Not necessarily in that order. Not necessarily in each section.

Section One; Section Two; Section Three; Section Four; Section Five; Section Six; Section Seven;

Comments

[blu_olivz]

OMG!
*reads*

[wedspawn]

♥♥♥♥

[blu_olivz]

the remains of a decimated brownie corpse lying helpless on a white plate

ahahahahahhaha. that amused me so much :)

“I think you can be with Joongie-ah if you want to. I think that loving anyone should be possible, even if it is another man.” Yoochun stared into Yunho’s teary eyes, his own face wet with emotion. “I have to believe that we can. Not just for your sake…but for mine.”

YOOSU WHUT?? ♥

[wedspawn]

i'm not telling; :)

♥♥♥♥♥ :::whispers yoosu:::: ♥♥♥♥♥

and well jaeho!

[seductivity]

THIS IS THE BEST CHAPTER EVER. I WILL BE BACK WITH A VERY LONG REVIEW AFTER I READ THIS OVER AGAIN 68484 TIMES. I LOVE YOU JSFUSFWJJFJSJF ♥!!!

And I like, dying of happiness of Yunho's final words, just fyi X3

[wedspawn]

♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥
thank you!

[seductivity]

And this isn't the review, because I am reading this again (making sure I don't miss anything, lol) as I go along, but I sense Yoosu happening? AM I RIGHT? AM I? :D?

[wedspawn]

♥♥ grins ♥♥ merely a figment of your imagination. i don't know what you're talking about :::Grins:::

don't feel like you have to give a review. :) just so long as you enjoy reading what you read :)

and yoochun IS fun to write for :D well so are the others

[bellasurus]

ME

[wedspawn]

♥♥♥♥ you! ♥♥♥♥

[bellasurus]

YOOSU ARE LOVE ♥ *wants to be bunny rabbit that junsu serenades*

puahaha. fake!jaechun XD *tosses jaechun to side*

I’ve never been loved…even that briefly…
jaejae you silly, blur, clueless boy, because...

“Chunnie-ah, I think I am in love with Kim Jaejoong.”
ZOMG. you need to tell him that JUNGYUNHO like WHOA.

[random]what happened to jae's bibimbap?[/random]

i want next chapter NOWWWW. nooo, i want it to end like NOW. so i can be happy with happy ending...it is a happy ending right?

and even more randomly, minnie's mommy being half in love with jaejae amuses me ^^

dialogue's less awkward but some of it still has that stilted feeling :x

[wedspawn]

he left everything on the counter! at least the rice was in the rice cooker and couldn't burn!

i'm pretty happy with the dialogue. it's a bit more formal that i would speak but hell, i hope to just dissolve the dialogue to moans :D

moans are easy to spell.

[lavhire]

AHHH NICE ONE! I love Chunnie's and Minnie's advice.

And how Yunho is keeping all his feelings inside eh? Go Yunnie you still have a chance.

MAN... I have been stalking you since yesterday wondering you have updated. I wanna what is next *____*

man.. this is like addiction. YUNNIE. YOU CAN DO IT. JONGIE DON'T LOSE HOPE *_*

I JUST LOVE YOU GAL!!

[wedspawn]

thank you! ♥♥♥ i hope that yunho can pull it off. i did dig him deep into a hole. he will have a hard time wooing jaejoong. hopefully he won't give up!

[lavhire]

YO MAN! I like THAT DEEP HOLE.. AHAHAHAH MIAN I'm LIKE THAT EHEHEHEHE

AHHHHHHHHHHH JAEHO !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

(opps sorry)

Oh ya I also like the fact that you made Jae Joong being swoon over by girl. TOO BAD Jae's sort-of-taken..

I might sound selfish but I really want to read the next chapter like now.. T__T it's just AHHHH driving me crazy.. HAHAHAHA

[wedspawn]

i haven't written it yet! :::Grins::: i'm really going day to day :) i don't even KNOW what's in the next section :D hopefully jaeho will be nice :D

thank you for reading.

[helloviola]

I stayed up till after midnight just for your next chapter and I'm so glad I did! I almost cried with joy when Yunho confessed to Yoochun but then I remembered that my mum is sleeping in the next room and I'd wake her up =P. I am crazy happy right now with Yunho's last words and am sure to have Jaeho dreams once again tonight ♥

[wedspawn]

♥♥♥ i am sorry i kept you up! i would have posted it sooner but i had to clean up a few bits. :) i am glad you liked it. :) and i'm very happy that you squealed for the yunho :D

definitely don't wake up anyone :) ♥♥♥ thank you for commenting! i hope i continue to keep you entertained.

[helloviola]

Don't be sorry! I'd stay up all night just to read Yunho's last line ^.^ Wow, I sound like a stalker now teehee.

I can't wait for Chapter 14!

[wedspawn]

♥♥♥♥ thank you! :::grins:::: i am glad you liked it. hopefully i can keep it up for the rest of it!