The Chronicles of Theodam

[jack_chan]

This is a story I am currently writing. I got the idea when I was flipping through the story collection in my "Stories And Songs" folder.
I came across two stories within that folder:

1. Dragon's Divinity by yours truly, Jackey Tran in 2003
2. Time And Space by ah chi, Nancy Pham in 2004

Basically this story is combining both concepts and plots

Comments

[caustic_candy]

Hello thar, fellow writer. First and foremost... w-why... are you still using Time and Space as a reference? The story is frankly an embarrassment - it was written over four years ago

[jack_chan]

A huge hit of comment is the best thing for any writer and as anyone can tell, I do have terrible grammar, which is very reasonable as I never read.

But thanks for all those smack on the head, it's really good rather than those who just go "Oh it's good", "it's cool", "nice work" etc blah blah blah ...

And as you might have notice, no, I do not know anything about Final Fantasy, so I wouldn't have known that Theodam or any of the following names. I guess I could come up with an original name. I used Theodam because my original idea was very similar to "The Legend of Zelda" and "The Chronicles of Narnia". Now does THAT ring any bells??

Another note is, it was not exactly the story itself. But it was the ideas behind it and no one can blame you for what you think is an embarrassment. This was dated all the way back there.

[jack_chan]

Come to think of it, I swear I had commas and not periods.

And for the arguing side of me (and obviously not seriously), you made HEAPS of spelling and grammar mistakes as well xD

[caustic_candy]

Ah... Theoden's from Lord of the Rings, in case you were wondering. And I hope to see more of Zelda and Narnia than Time and Space. 'Twould be much better for my poor heart