Dec 14, 2005 03:11
Just a revised and now finished ( i think... Well, for tonight anyway) version of my song I Never Knew. dunno why. just got to looking through some of my stuff today and automatically started making revisions and changes. I guess i just realized how incomplete it was. its always bothered me that it was so small but i could never figure out what to do with it. But now ive kinda got a handle on it. So here it is. the original and the revised versions. just putting it out there. if you like it, cool. if you dont, *shrugs* didnt write it for you anyway, so *blows raspberry at critics*
"More Than You." - Original(still unsure of which title to go with...)
Way to be, Baby.
You’ve managed to break my heart.
My only hope is that this was your plan from the start.
Otherwise some part of you just might live to regret this.
I should have been better at reading your signs.
I should have known better from the look in your eyes.
And I really should have noticed your lack of intrest.
You can’t blame me though,
Not for wanting to be loved.
Not for trying to see the best there was in you.
Too bad I took so long to give up.
Am I so easy to desert?
Did I miss something from before?
Am I just getting what I deserve?
Maybe I just deserve something more.
Something more than you.
"I Never Knew" - Revised
Way to be, Baby.
You’ve managed to break my heart.
My only hope is that this was your plan from the start.
Otherwise some part of you just might live to regret this.
Am I so easy to desert?
Did I miss something from before?
Am I just getting what I deserve?
What should I do to deserve you?
I never knew.
I should have been better at reading your signs.
I should have known better from the look in your eyes.
And I really should have noticed your lack of interest.
You can’t blame me though,
Not for wanting to be loved.
Not for trying to see the best there was in you.
Too bad I took so long to give up.
Now it feels like I never knew you before.
Am I so easy to desert?
Did I miss something from before?
Am I just getting what I deserve?
What should I do to deserve you?
I never knew
I was so easy to desert.
Guess I missed something from before.
I suppose I’m just getting what I deserve…
Maybe I just deserve something more;
Something more than you.