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shalinilahiri in iyissekiwa

Bystander Theme- Bystander?

May 01, 2007 05:34

Title: Bystander?
Genre: Humour
Word Count: 250
Rating: T

Summary: Miroku never likes being a bystander, then why now?

Bystander?

“ My Hero!”, the beautiful princess screamed as she ran into Miroku’s arms.

Miroku sighed softly in his sleep, as one more dream involving pretty women swooning over him came to an end. This scenario had been ( Read more... )

shalinilahiri, #026 bystander

Comments 9

theiyobsessed May 1 2007, 02:10:18 UTC

xD Bad Miroku! But a good drabble. I'm going to have a hard time voting this week! You're making me rethink the plans I had. But I guess that's a good thing. Nice work.

shalinilahiri May 1 2007, 05:44:00 UTC

Hee, thanks! Sometimes, we all must unleash our funny side!

Thanks again!

dr_abraxas May 1 2007, 15:30:12 UTC

Bystanding? LOL Is that what the pervert Miroku calls it? Nice use of the theme :)

shalinilahiri May 2 2007, 09:34:01 UTC

I call it letching and trying not to follow the Buddha. Thanks for the review!

farawayeyes4 May 1 2007, 20:26:52 UTC

Naughty Miroku indeed. The bad boy should know better than to peek! Then again, who knows, he might be surprised. Sango could ask him to join in instead of hitting him. You never know.

farawayeyes4 May 2 2007, 09:35:46 UTC

Oh, she'd definitely like him to join in. Just let's say someone's wandering hands aand a bit of ego gets in the way.

Thanks! :D

shalinilahiri May 2 2007, 09:48:48 UTC

D'Oh! That was me earlier!

amara_anon May 6 2007, 03:22:55 UTC

Heh, funny stuff. I love the sentence where you compare Miroku, Inuyasha, and Sango's view of his "help". ;)

shalinilahiri May 6 2007, 03:41:59 UTC

Thanks! Coming from you, that's a big compliment. I tried writing something remotely funny after all the angst I write.

Thanks again!