Week 167: Hair or Hare

[marishaten]

Title: Lovesick
Author: marishaten
Words: 214
Prompt: Hair or Hare
Universe: Canon/Alternate Ending
Rating: M
Warning: Angst, character death
Summary: What if the well hadn’t reopened one last time?

Comments

[rickashay1]

Wow...

Wow...

Gosh...

I don't really know what to say...it's so dark for you and yet I understand Kagome perfectly.

Just wow...

Really impressive that you managed to write this, the end though...it was just a pow.

Wow...

[marishaten]

Oh thank you so, so much!! Really, your comment has made my day! Just reading it was such a great boost to my morale!

I don't like writing angst just for the sake of it but it does feel good to let out the darkness once in a while. Especially writing this was quite cathartic. And I'm glad you found Kagome to be plausible. Thank you so much once again!

[kryss_delrhei]

OH! I got shivers! I wasn't expecting that at all, but it's understandable! All that time spent with him and the others and then nothing but a regular life without him. I was so very surprised with it but WOW you blew me away, cause I was expecting something totally different! Again wonderful!

[marishaten]

Thank you so much! I was wondering what to write for this prompt and the 'hair' line came to my head. Then I built the story around it. I'm so glad you found it plausible!

[landofthekwt]

Such a sad end for such a loving person. She just could not find happiness without IY

[marishaten]

Thank you so much for the review! Sorry for the dark ending, though...I think Kagome would have found it difficult to go on ad infinitum without IY. Life can be such a burden at times...