August Flashfic

[astarvingwriter]

Title: The Destiny of Inanimate Objects
Author's Name: astarvingwriter
Written For: amara-anon
Characters: Just about everyone of the anti-Naraku persuasion + 1 inanimate object
Rating: Any Age
Spoiler Warnings: Not particularly but through when Kohaku stumbles upon new travel arrangements
Author's Note: You asked for parody and something imitating parody you will receive

Comments

[wheezambu]

Now that was really great! That is a excellent use of the narrative style and probably one of the most unique pieces I've seen in a long time. The writing flowed effortlessly and I found myself grinning wider and wider the whole time I read it. I loved the perspective of a bag of chips, it gave a completely fresh insight into each character.

Very well written, a hell of a lot of fun, and something so creatively done I know I'm going to be reading it over and over.

[amara_anon]

Thank you very much for writing this for me! Very original, well-executed, and fun. By the time I got to, "Thus, we begin," I was already chuckling. ^^

One sentence that seems to have fallen victim to autofix, The emptied bag drifted alone the wing.... I think you meant "along the wind".

It was neat that we both got to write for each other this month. Thanks again.

[parsnip_chan]

Loved it! As others have said, the flow was wonderful and the tone of voice was light and fun. It was innovative and taken from such a creative viewpoint that I doubt I'll be able to look at a bag of chips without smiling for a while to come now.

[lucindathemaid]

Oh wow, this was great! I was laughing all the way through. I love that you described the characters in such a way that a reader immediately could understand who they were, but without mentioning any names. That takes skill, and based on this whole piece, you most definitely have it. Awesome work! *bows*

[nokomarie]

I quite liked that. Good luck with the nom.