[FANFIC] Solace

Jul 02, 2011 00:05

Title: Solace
Author: ivysauur  
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Yunjae/Yunho and Jaejoong
Genre: Drama, AU, Angst (minor), Romance
Length: 3/10? (Chaptered)
Warning: First time writing a chaptered fic. Minor grammar errors.
Summary: Jaejoong is a product of a broken marriage. His parents only married for the sake of the child and because of their strict families. After ( Read more... )

genre: romance, genre: angst, dbsk, genre: au, pairing: yunjae, genre: drama, length: chaptered, rating: pg-13, fanfic: solace

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emarisbee July 2 2011, 02:25:54 UTC
Aish, poor guy. I'd understand his feeling. Daring Urself unconsciously to raise a little hope, only to have it shattered by little indifference. It might not mean anything (his mother's lack of interest about his whereabouts) but to a troubled teenager coming from a 'broken' family, it is everything bad.
I like this chapter! It's not rushed. I can relate to JaeJoong personally & from how U wrote him, I can tell U that everything is believable & not 'forced'. JaeJoong is the kind that silently/secretly wants to be loved, scared of loneliness & alone, he'd like to be assured of his importance & place, so YunHo's interest/company will makes him absolutely in joy but like U said, he's not ever going to admit that. He's not even going to acknowledge that fact / do something to ensure he'll get the attention he wants because he's afraid of the 'falling' & chance of rejection. It's better to be alone like he chose himself to do than to be left behind / disappointed by people.
TQ! Interesting chapter, found put bout YunHo's adoption & older age.
BTW, thank yoU for adding me back.

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