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From Being Gone - Chapter 4

Aug 03, 2009 01:12

Chapter 1

Chapter 2

Chapter 3

Title: From Being Gone
Author(s): Lynders11
Fandom: The Hollows
Summary: Rachel leaves for two weeks to attend her brothers wedding and see her mom settled at her new place. What happens when she gets back after spending more time away from Ivy than ever before? This takes place after WWBC, so some spoilers are included
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humor_vitri August 3 2009, 12:39:18 UTC

At least, Rachel is realizing what does she feel for Ivy (big step here!)

I can't wait to know how will Rachel handle to watch a cartoon movie lol

lynders11 August 6 2009, 15:00:52 UTC

Yup, Rachel is slowly realising it. :) The cartoon should be fun, lol.

su_bones August 3 2009, 13:54:52 UTC

Was that a mailbox?

I cracked up so much at this line :P

Love it, and I'm glad Rachel is starting to realize what we all have known for so long :)

lynders11 August 6 2009, 15:01:52 UTC

hehehehe, i'm glad you liked it. I had alot of fun writing this chapter and that was exactly the reaction i wanted from that line. :) Glad it worked!!

vjb2006 August 4 2009, 04:27:23 UTC

glad to see you continuing this - I missed it :)

At least Rachel is willing to rethink some of her pre-conceived notions. Amazing what a little time and distance will do for you once you come back to your object-of-desire!

lynders11 August 6 2009, 15:03:03 UTC

Isnt it crazy? Absence makes the heart grow fonder and all that. Lol, maybe the road trip Kim Harrison keeps talking about will have an effect like this....

ic1pher August 5 2009, 20:02:29 UTC

Hope you write more of this, it was very entertaining. :)

lynders11 August 6 2009, 03:56:35 UTC

I definitely have! I am very glad that you are enjoying this ic!pher, I'm a fan of your writing so its really cool for me to see you enjoying mine!! Chapter 5 is off to my Beta and should be up soon. :) Thanks for reading!

ultraily August 6 2009, 03:32:13 UTC

I loled irl when Rachel moaned Ivy's name and found out that there were microphones in the helmet.
But this chapter was great. It's really amazing where this is going and I can't wait to read the next chapter.

Keep up the wonderful work! I'll be looking forward to the update.
:)

lynders11 August 6 2009, 03:53:51 UTC

I couldnt help but throw that in there. Ivy would of had t have known that Rachel was getting turned on even without the audio but it just seemed too good a chance to pass up to let Rachel know Ivy knew. Even if Rachel is still trying to convince herself that she didnt. lol. Chapter 5 should be up soon, its off right now to my awesome Beta. He rocks. :)