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[itsarift_thing]

Title: Barter
Author: mad_jaks
Characters: Nine/Jack, Rose
Genre: Drabble, gen
Rating: G
Prompt: dw100#183:trade
Summary: Jack's in need of rescuing
Disclaimer: Not mine - making no money

Now with added darkly!moral!Jack, sequel Just Desserts

Comments

[bulky_monster]

*huggles Jack* I lub him so.

Very good characterization of the Ninth Doctor, which is difficult in such a short piece of writing. I'm intrigued. Maybe you could use this for a longer story :)

[itsarift_thing]

Thanks.
I'm intrigued. Maybe you could use this for a longer story
I get that comment once in a while :D Sometimes I even try it, not often though...

[bulky_monster]

Some drabbles are very definitely one-shot type material. Yours, however, reads like a prologue or a teaser. You are a tease ;)

[itsarift_thing]

I- can't help it? I think my brain is hardwired that way. Nothing would please me more than to be one of these people who can sit down to write and come up with a thousand or so words of story with a beginning, middle and end. Alas it is not to be :(

[bulky_monster]

I know how you feel. I'm fairly good at scenes I suppose, but terrible at pacing and complex plots.

[itsarift_thing]

I don't normally get as far as having to worry about pacing... :D