[Mini-Series] Undeniable Sin - Part 02

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Title: Undeniable Sin
Pairing: Yoochun/Changmin
Genre: Angst, Drama
Rating: R
Warnings: Blood relative incest
Summery: Yoochun is unable to deny Changmin

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spot for insomoleptic

[pawshingo]

Whoooaaaa! Wow! Changmin is such a predator! He just knows which button to press to get Yoochun going! The ending was kinda sad, "Do you hate me?" It made Minnie sound so small, helpless in a way.

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Changmin knows exactly what he's doing but at the same time is still a scared kid and wants his brother to love him.

Thank you so much for reading :D

[gompi]

Jaejoong, who Yoochun used to date, asks him to dinner one evening Changmin's shopping with friends. He readily agrees, needing to see a fresh face and possibly more. He needs to see someone other than his lascivious brother who's taken to strutting around the house in tight jeans and no shirt. He knows he's doing it on purpose, to tempt him, to entice him and Yoochun usually falls prey to his advancements.

It's killing him.

i can die happy now (:

He wonders if people know. Perhaps he should wear a letter, a blood red I in the center of his chest that warn people he's filthy in sin.

he can be an Incest cheerleader!

"He's grown," Jaejoong comments with a wicked glint in his eyes and Yoochun sighs, running his hands along his flushed face. "If he weren't you brother I'd try-"

"Shut the fuck up," Yoochun bites and throws Jaejoong's t-shirt at him; he laughs as he slides it back on and Yoochun glances briefly towards Changmin's room. "He's a kid," he mutters and it pains him to remember it.

meow~

"I should be going soon," Jaejoong

[chloe1910]

Yoochun ah, you know Jaejoong is right, Changmin is really dangerous. I hope you know what you are doing....

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Yoochun is still trying to figure that out :/ but he definitely will :)

Thank you so much for reading!!

[nivani]

damn, my magic didn't work this time ;;
spot for me =.=/

[nivani]

you made me cry again lol, it's been a while, I blame pms. I think the last sentence did it, you always kill me with those short, blunt sentences, I love them ♥

short comment because I'm dead tired and you wouldn't believe me even if I tried to sound excited (but I totally am!) erm, I'm not sure if my point is clear here. I mean, that I better cut the fail, that would be surely to come due to my lack of sleep, and this fic deserves much better. I think I'll shut up now. yes.

[ephemeral_blue]

awww! No crying!! *hugs wife*

No worries, I love anything you write for me. I hope you were able to get some rest ♥

[nivani]

I probably wasn't XD
but I'll tale the hug, thank you *hugs back*
are you busy or sth? seems like you haven't been too much around~

[roseltv]

I really like how Changmin can be an angel for one minute and a devil the next. "Do you hate me?" is really a good one. It undid YooChun and I'm sure no matter how Changmin treats him, YooChun will not be able to refuse.

*give u candies* for updating so soon ^^.

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Well thank you :D *enjoying candies*

Changmin definitely has his devilish qualities but at the same time he's still a kid who wants his brother to love him and knows when he's disappointed him.

Thank you for reading!!

[kurogoma]

despite being rather manipulative with yoochun's feelings and weaknesses, changmin breaks my heart with his little moments of vulnerability. he's a brave kid, going for what he wants although knowing it's taboo. i hope yoochun joins him willingly in sin soon. &hearts

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Changmin definitely has his moments of realizing what he's doing may not be completely ok with Yoochun. And well... Yoochun's a little messed up but no worries, things will become clear to him :D

Thank you for reading!!!