Title: “First Impressions”
Author: Shaitanah
Rating: G
Summary: Jurgen knows that the first impression is always the most important. R&R!
Disclaimer: Equilibrium doesn’t belong to Kishimoto Masashi; weird, huh? belongs to Kurt Wimmer and Dimension Films.
Dedication: to my dear nii-san
dune_master for being the top of the awesome! (It’s Jurgen! Go read it NAO
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Kakashi XDD
Anyway... there is something true about what you wrote here - in the end he kinda killed his feelings T__T Now I'll always connect him with Itachi :(
Good job here :)
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Yeah, but at least he survived, saved the world and was a hero))) And he still had his kids and Jurgen as a friend, muhahahah! There was a moment in the film when they talked about killing the feelings: that was scary)))
Thank you, darling! I'm glad you like it))
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But he lost his wife and the other woman he fall in love with, didn't he? I think I need to see the movie again.
You're welcome ^^
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I still think he'd make a cool Kakashi. Any actor with his hairstyle would look weird. Manga characters tend to have weird looks that looks stupid on live ppl)))
Yes, he did. But Itachi got off far worse: he lost everything including reputation and life(((( T_T *sobs*
You definitely should))))
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He only hopes Preston is the kind of a murderer he is looking for: the one who will not only kill the right men, but his own feelings too when the time comes.
Good line. :)
Now I sort of want to see this movie. XD
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Thank you, darling! ^_^ Glad you liked it))
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I liked this, I hope you write more :), be well and take care.
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Thank you very much! ^_^ I'm a huge Equilibrium fan))) I would like to write more if ideas hit me)))
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Anyway, I love how you wrote Jurgen and his wary attention towards Preston. Even though the two of them don't interact, it's still very powerful, knowing what Preston will have to do in the end. I absolutely love the flow of this drabble, and present tense fits so well here. And the small hints of Partridge/Mary couldn't be more touching and expressive. Thank you sooo much! *kiss*
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Jurgen wins! He easily pwns everyone there - sometimes even Preston))) And I know your opinion on Mary and her guys)))) LOL!
*kisses back*
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HE DOES! Because instead of his name he introduces himself as "You're feeling"! And that says the lot!
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ROFL! That's a very cool way to show how tough he is!
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That, he does. XDDDD
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