The last Spam gift drabble. Equilibrium: First Impressions

Jul 25, 2008 23:43

Title: “First Impressions”
Author: Shaitanah
Rating: G
Summary: Jurgen knows that the first impression is always the most important. R&R!
Disclaimer: Equilibrium doesn’t belong to Kishimoto Masashi; weird, huh? belongs to Kurt Wimmer and Dimension Films.
Dedication: to my dear nii-san dune_master for being the top of the awesome! (It’s Jurgen! Go read it NAO ( Read more... )

gift fic, gen, eq, ch: errol partridge, ch: jurgen, films, fanfiction

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helike July 25 2008, 20:06:03 UTC
There is something underneath the underneath;

Kakashi XDD

Anyway... there is something true about what you wrote here - in the end he kinda killed his feelings T__T Now I'll always connect him with Itachi :(

Good job here :)

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istne_pieklo July 25 2008, 20:10:43 UTC
Hahahaha, Preston would look cool in a mask)) Actually I sometimes do think that Bale could make a fine Kakashi. But I have trouble picturing him with such wild hair. XDD
Yeah, but at least he survived, saved the world and was a hero))) And he still had his kids and Jurgen as a friend, muhahahah! There was a moment in the film when they talked about killing the feelings: that was scary)))
Thank you, darling! I'm glad you like it))

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helike July 25 2008, 20:17:48 UTC
well... he does wear a mask as Batman, but a bit different, and definitely looks cool XDD but with Kakashi's hairstyle? XDD; Nah... crazy :/

But he lost his wife and the other woman he fall in love with, didn't he? I think I need to see the movie again.

You're welcome ^^

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istne_pieklo July 25 2008, 20:23:05 UTC
I meant Kakashi-like mask! ^_^ But he looks cool in anything)))
I still think he'd make a cool Kakashi. Any actor with his hairstyle would look weird. Manga characters tend to have weird looks that looks stupid on live ppl)))
Yes, he did. But Itachi got off far worse: he lost everything including reputation and life(((( T_T *sobs*
You definitely should))))

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dayadhvam_triad July 26 2008, 14:36:36 UTC
Ohh, very cool! I haven't seen this film, but I wiki-ed it (wikipedia ftw XDD), and I think you did a good job of capturing the sense of deprivation they have.

He only hopes Preston is the kind of a murderer he is looking for: the one who will not only kill the right men, but his own feelings too when the time comes.
Good line. :)

Now I sort of want to see this movie. XD

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istne_pieklo July 26 2008, 15:22:45 UTC
You should definitely watch it! I never expected to love it as much as I do, but it became one of my top fav movies ever!
Thank you, darling! ^_^ Glad you liked it))

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dayadhvam_triad July 26 2008, 16:03:21 UTC
I will definitely watch it sometime. It looks like my type of movie. :DD

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istne_pieklo July 26 2008, 19:08:33 UTC
I'm a sucker for anti-utopias, both books and films))))) and for Christian Bale

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monicaop July 26 2008, 14:51:07 UTC
This is interesting, how someone might have looked at John and seen something more, everyone could see there was something special about him... except for him.

I liked this, I hope you write more :), be well and take care.

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istne_pieklo July 26 2008, 15:25:48 UTC
I remember him saying he was somehow able to sense when a sense offender was feeling, sometimes even before the man knew it himself))) So why not apply the same technique to him? I wonder if Jurgen could have been a Cleric before he quit Prozium. Maybe a very long time ago)))
Thank you very much! ^_^ I'm a huge Equilibrium fan))) I would like to write more if ideas hit me)))

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dune_master September 2 2008, 16:11:15 UTC
Oh, sweetheart! That's just... the best welcoming present ever! So sorry that I didn't read it a long time ago as I should have!
Anyway, I love how you wrote Jurgen and his wary attention towards Preston. Even though the two of them don't interact, it's still very powerful, knowing what Preston will have to do in the end. I absolutely love the flow of this drabble, and present tense fits so well here. And the small hints of Partridge/Mary couldn't be more touching and expressive. Thank you sooo much! *kiss*

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istne_pieklo September 2 2008, 16:43:16 UTC
SQUEE!!!!! Glad you like it)))) I had a hard time coming up with smth unexpected for you. And it's okay, I was just nervous about you disappearing from my super-duper radars of lurve.
Jurgen wins! He easily pwns everyone there - sometimes even Preston))) And I know your opinion on Mary and her guys)))) LOL!
*kisses back*

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dune_master September 2 2008, 17:07:58 UTC
In all that time I checked my mail only twice))) So sorry, honey! I'm just a very RL person)))
HE DOES! Because instead of his name he introduces himself as "You're feeling"! And that says the lot!

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istne_pieklo September 2 2008, 17:33:41 UTC
I envy you about that)))) But I didn't check the net on vacation either, even though I found out that our hotel actually had computers 2 days before departure)))
ROFL! That's a very cool way to show how tough he is!

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istne_pieklo July 29 2010, 07:42:42 UTC
I bet it's all part of some monstrous conspiracy. After all, both Naruto AND Kishimoto belong to Yumekichi, so EQ probably does too)))
That, he does. XDDDD

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