Fic: Far Off Places (Alex/Sawyer)

Jul 07, 2008 22:48

Title: Far Off Places
Rating: PG
Summary: Paradise doesn’t look like paradise when you’re trapped there.
Disclaimer: I do not own Lost. At all. I wish but alas...
Author's Note: For gottalovev, for the luau at lostsquee. This loosely fits the vacation prompt, but you might have to squint at it a little. I also aged Alex up a few years so I didn't feel creepy.

Paradise doesn’t look like paradise when you’re trapped there. )

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janie_tangerine July 8 2008, 06:57:09 UTC
This was really good. You have a pretty excellent Alex voice I have to say! It was short but it covered a lot of things, and all of your/her observations were definitely IC. Especially her being forced to grow up too fast and the paradise/not paradise. Sawyer's ambiguity was also very well played.

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isis2015 July 8 2008, 07:07:58 UTC
Thank you. :) I'm glad you liked it.

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gottalovev July 8 2008, 14:57:24 UTC
I really feel for Alex here, because I am sure she has those dreams and being trapped must be quite awful. I'd get tired of the beach too, if it was the only thing I could ever see (I think?)

Sawyer probably means what he says too, but that Alex is in it with her eyes open is best.

I love your take on the prompt, that was lovely! thank you!

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isis2015 July 8 2008, 20:45:33 UTC
I think, if I were Alex, I would dream about what the real world was like. I think she'd resent the place a lot less if she knew she could leave if she wanted to. But she hates Ben, and he's keeping her there, so it makes sense she'd hate the island too.

I'm glad you liked this, hun, thanks. :)

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demonqueen666 July 8 2008, 17:57:01 UTC
Poor Alex. She really did have a pretty lousy lot in life, didn't she? :(

This was a creative take on the prompt. Reading these two interacting together is always interesting.

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isis2015 July 8 2008, 20:46:40 UTC
Alex got one of the rawest deals on the show, and a part of me still isn't over that. :/ Her and Danielle deserved better.

I'm glad you liked this, thanks. :)

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siluria July 8 2008, 18:21:19 UTC
That's rather heartbreaking when you know what happens to Alex, but it's very bittersweet, despite her loss of innocence. Very nice!

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isis2015 July 8 2008, 20:47:06 UTC
Thank you. :)

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isis2015 July 8 2008, 20:48:20 UTC
I really love playing around with Sawyer and Alex. Their interaction on the show was minimal, but it always interested me, so I love writing fic about them. :) I'm glad you liked it, thank you.

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