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Fic: Fallout - Part Four (Jack/Sawyer)

Sep 19, 2007 08:59

Title: Fallout - Part Four
Rating: PG-13
Summary: He looks at Jack and he wants to tell him everything, because Jack deserves that. He looks like a man who’s been lied to one too many times.
Disclaimer: I do not own Lost. At all. I wish but alas...
Author's Note: This is the next part of my continuing Jack/Sawyer, post-apocalyptic AU saga. :) Over ( Read more... )

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Comments 6

siluria September 19 2007, 17:45:49 UTC

Yay, a new part!!! I really love the premise and the world itself has formed wonderfully in my head, The developing relationship between Jack and Sawyer is full of insecurities on both sides and it's just so yummy!!

isis2015 September 19 2007, 17:48:26 UTC

Thank you! :) That's fantastic to hear. I'm glad you're enjoying this, and thank you for reading. ♥

alemyrddin September 19 2007, 19:35:57 UTC

This AU is really intriguing, and I love how you are weaving into this those bits about the island and the Dharma as we know it.

And all the awkwardness between Jack and Sawyer is sweet.
I love how their feelings are trying to surface, like in this part:
He wonders how, after a lifetime of stuffing every emotion he feels down deep inside of him, he suddenly feels out of practice. He wonders why he’s letting this guy, this guy he doesn’t even really know, overwhelm him

:)

isis2015 September 19 2007, 22:39:39 UTC

Thanks! :) I'm trying to keep it interesting apart from the boys. Lord knows I love them and I wish they'd just do it already, but I want to make sure that everything else is intriguing too. I'm gratified to hear you say it is.

Thank you for reading! ♥

zelda_zee September 27 2007, 00:52:44 UTC

isis2015 September 27 2007, 01:07:25 UTC

I finally read this last night and then I was too tired to leave fb. I hate to admit that I'd been hesitant because of the warning that it would take a long time to get to the J/S stuff. I know, I suck.

You don't suck, hun. :) I put that up there for a reason, because I wanted people to know what they were getting into. I couldn't just jump into the Jack/Sawyer bits -- this is a bit plot-heavy, where as some of my other stories/series have been character-heavy -- and I wanted to give people an out, just in case they weren't interested in waiting around for a series to get where it was going. I don't hold the fact that you weren't sure against you, believe me.

Anyway, now that I am finally all caught up with it, I'm really loving this. Something about it sort of feels Firefly-ish, is that possible? I know you're writing a real Firefly AU and that this isn't it, but I keep picturing a Firefly-ish world in this series.I think the brilliant thing that Joss does is that, beyond the characters and the settings, he gives his shows and ( ... )