Comments | irishunicorn03: Part II: stay and fight back

irishunicorn03

Part II: stay and fight back

Jul 03, 2011 20:09

Title: stay and fight back
Prompt: fight/castle100
Rating: PG
Fandom: Castle
Summary: He arrives to beeping monitors and humming machines.
Spoilers: Knockout
Disclaimer: Not mine.
Author's Notes: Sequel to words and promises we couldn't keep. I think I'm going to make this a mini-fic, each chapter a 100 word drabble, because I'm having fun playing in this little ( Read more... )

series: you will be my ain true love, pairing: castle/beckett, fandom: castle, character: richard castle, community: castle100

Comments 9

stardust_20 July 4 2011, 11:15:59 UTC

I love this, so very much. And I love the idea that you're going to write a whole story in drabbles. That is so unique! I can't wait to read them all.

♥

irishunicorn03 July 6 2011, 23:02:57 UTC

Thanks! I'm excited about writing them because I don't write serial fics, so hopefully the rest will live up to expectations.

melissa_pbfan July 4 2011, 17:13:58 UTC

So, so beautiful. <3

irishunicorn03 July 5 2011, 22:49:45 UTC

Thank you!

mystizan July 6 2011, 04:07:30 UTC

POWERFUL. Much love for fight this, he commands. the world shouldn't exist without you.

he holds his breathe. she's silent.

he leans over, places a kiss against her cheek, and waits.

irishunicorn03 July 7 2011, 14:45:42 UTC

Thank you. It's almost ridiculous how man times I rewrote those last two lines, so I'm glad you pointed those out.

mystizan July 7 2011, 23:28:35 UTC

ORly? Well then it paid off.

iconoclasstic July 18 2011, 18:59:42 UTC

wow...I never am into drabbles but this is just so amazing!

irishunicorn03 July 19 2011, 16:04:05 UTC

Thank you! I'm having tons of fun writing these. Hopefully the muse will be back so that I can continue them.