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irishcookie

Hallmark Rejects (2/2 - Damon/Bonnie)

Feb 19, 2011 15:38

Title: Hallmark Rejects
Part: 2 of 2
Rating: PG 13 for a few curses,references to violence, and sex innuendos
Pairing: Damon/Bonnie
Disclaimer: Vampire Diaries belongs to L.J Smith and the lovely people who brought it to TV
Summary: A year's worth of holidays - Damon and Bonnie style.
Author's Note: Sorry for the longer wait then expected! ( Read more... )

damon/bonnie, vampire diaries, fanfic

Comments 15

graygale February 20 2011, 00:05:45 UTC

These are excellent to read. Love them, a lot.

irishcookie February 20 2011, 02:05:04 UTC

Thank you so much! I am glad that you enjoyed my little tale!

ficangel February 20 2011, 16:56:37 UTC

This was very fun, and I liked it a lot. You did a great job of capturing Bonnie and Damon's inherent snarkiness towards each other.

irishcookie February 20 2011, 23:00:54 UTC

Thank you so much for your feedback! I am always so worried about characterizations so when I hear from people that they are close to what the show presents it makes me grin.

Thanks again!

bambiscott February 20 2011, 17:41:23 UTC

aw loved it! More of these two please.

irishcookie February 20 2011, 23:01:14 UTC

This is definitely not the last of Bamon from me!

Thank you so much!

cryngle February 20 2011, 20:13:53 UTC

I seriously wish you were on the panel of writers for TVD. I can only imagine the wonders you’d sling together for Bamon. The end of 4th of July where he tells her he’ll stand guard and that she should look up put the biggest smile on my face. If this were a scene, it would be on the number one list.

Bonnie’s Birthday
It’s as if she just needs to keep giving him shit to reassure herself of her feelings, that they aren’t changing and that she still hates him. It’s nice that she realizes that in the end.

Halloween
Something I wouldn’t mind seeing this year in S2. It might be a little too much to ask considering all the crap the writers tend to linger on but the fact that there is even a small taste of their anniversary about there is to good for words.

Thanksgiving
The image of Damon in an apron is fully imprinted on my mind and have no doubt that he’d actually go so far, his just that comfortable in himself. The interactions between her father and B/D made me smile. “I’ll have some of Bonnie’s pie.” - I bet he would, in a heart ( ... )

irishcookie February 20 2011, 23:04:41 UTC

First of all, thank you so much! It makes me grin so much - it really does. This story turned into a bit of a monster for me and I am so glad that people have enjoyed it. Thank you for taking the time to write such a detailed and wonderful review.

:) :) :) :)

You rock!

cryngle February 21 2011, 08:08:43 UTC

Good. I've returned the favor then since I'll probably be back to read this in the near, near future. *cough*tonight*cough*

It's a precious monster. I look forward to many of them popping up in future and think nothing of it. Praise is much deserved!

:)

nurse_stiney February 20 2011, 22:09:27 UTC

LOL I LOVE how you consistently kept that delicious tension and AMAZING BANTER between them, and then having it culminate in such an innocent-BUT-REALLY-NOT kiss. :P Gorgeous and funny and SO VERY THEM. :D :D :D

irishcookie February 20 2011, 23:06:11 UTC

I am so glad that you caught onto how not innocent a little peck on the lips is.

I lover the banter between them on the show so I couldn't help but play with that throughout the story.

Thank you so much taking the time to give me some feedback! Reviews are so fuel for me!