'Citin'! :D The premise reminds me of the meat puppets from Neuromancer and since I always liked Molly (despite the fact that she was practically 2D), I think it could be interesting. If I'm honest, though, I feel like I've grown bored of the Wronged-Woman-Kicking-Ass-And-Discovering-Her-True-Identity trope. Eh. We'll see.
It's sad to practically live inside a story for a few days and then realize you've written all that you can write (for now) and be forced to put it aside. Sigh. (It's statements like this that make people think that writers are weird, isn't it? >_>)
I'd seen this labelled as Ryland/VickyT, but I wasn't entirely convinced. Then I went through and scrutinized other pictures of VickyT's hair and ears. I'm about 95% sure it is her now. *obsessive*