Finally wrote another short story. I had several ideas that I had left out of it, including the introduction of a young mischief maker named Lucifer. Enjoy! ( Young Dio )
This kind of context for our world would figure . . .ink_bleederJuly 2 2009, 15:21:45 UTC
Clever concept. It's interesting to think of God as a kid and the world as his mistreated pet project. What kind of punishment would he recieve for this kind of failure
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Re: This kind of context for our world would figure . . .intylerwetrust0July 2 2009, 20:39:40 UTC
Them speaking so rigidly was not intentional. I have no reason except that I find dialogue hard to write. Maybe if I plotted out a small character profile I can developed more of a personality... or maybe because they are beings of power that they will of course speak proper, but its plain they are fallible in many ways so I guess I will have to work on that aspect
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