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anytime

Apr 04, 2010 22:09

anytime
jonghyun/key
588 words of kdrama-esque cheesiness :3
he is too late, he's always been too late, right from the start when he was too slow to realize what his heart was telling him all along.

( Jonghyun has always been too self-conscious, has always refused to act uncool in public, but this is urgent and life-threatening and if Kibum gets on that plane without knowing how he feels, he thinks he will just die because his heart is already feeling like it's about to stop working. )

writings, genre: fluff, length: oneshot, fandom: shinee, pairing: jonghyun/key

Comments 37

germxsg April 4 2010, 14:40:33 UTC

I really LOL-ed at the "It would have been perfect without the vulgarities, you know. But anyway, it took you long enough." I totally can imagine Kibum saying that! And the part where no one took Jinki seriously was simply hilarious too!! =X I guess it always the simplest thing you say and do that make the difference. I love this fluff! <33

redcottonstar April 6 2010, 10:47:55 UTC

thank you! :)

byuldeureul April 4 2010, 14:46:46 UTC

That was a nice little slice of wonderful I read just now, homg. ♥♥♥

Maybe I'm a sucker for dramatic confession scenes, but this didn't seem 'cheesy' to me at all. :D I guess I should attribute that to your writing style - so clean and clear and crisp. /flails It's not descriptive to the point where it hurts anyone's eyes with blocks of text like mine and the emotion comes through without too much outright saying what the characters are feeling. And I like that a lot.

Also,
When Kibum finally disentangles himself from Jonghyun, Minho is standing there smiling that stupid all-knowing smile, Taemin is laughing through his tears, and Jinki is still sobbing. "You guys, this isn't a drama," Jinki says, but he's crying too hard for anyone to take him seriously anyway.

"And so they lived happily ever after," Taemin teases. Minho ruffles his hair, and Jonghyun and Kibum exchange a look and start laughing at the same time.
THIS IS PROBABLY MY FAVORITE PART RIGHT HERE. ;w; All kinds of adorable and sweet and OT5-ish and uuuuuuuurgh ♥ ( ... )

redcottonstar April 6 2010, 10:48:47 UTC

thank you! 2min? well, i do have a soft spot for them :'D

jongkeylicious April 4 2010, 14:48:08 UTC

I like it a lot!!!xxDD..
LoLed at Jinki!! HAHAH

redcottonstar April 6 2010, 10:48:56 UTC

thank you!

aishi07 April 4 2010, 15:20:19 UTC

OH MY GOD IF I COULD QUOTE THE WHOLE THING I WOULD
THIS IS LIKE THE PERFECT KDRAMA EVER IF EVER BECAUSE IT IS SO BEAUTIFULLY WELL-WRITTEN AND KIBUM'S VOICE DESCRIPTION WAS JUST WONDERFUL AND BKFSJFJKFB ANBF KASBVFHAVHFVAHFBVJABFJMCA CJ AJ KJ AKHFVHAJVFHKAVFHKAVKFAHFV
*INCOHERENT*

WRITE MORE PRZ. 8D

i know it isn't really a helpful comment, but i rarely do that because i'm pretty choosy with stories and such. ._. <3

redcottonstar April 6 2010, 10:49:14 UTC

thank you for reading and commenting! :D

anthonymarie April 4 2010, 15:32:38 UTC

THIS IS SOOOOOOOOOOO SWEET
OMG.
=(
follow up please .LOL. jk <3
but seriously. jongkey = epic.

redcottonstar April 6 2010, 10:49:26 UTC

jongkey! ♥ thank you!