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superstar

Feb 03, 2010 11:18

superstar
jonghyun/key
1751 words
If it isn't okay, Jonghyun will make it okay. This is how it's always been.

( he's used to this, used to kibum not being around whenever jonghyun needs him the most. )

writings, genre: angst, length: oneshot, fandom: shinee, pairing: jonghyun/key

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redcottonstar February 8 2010, 14:19:34 UTC

thank you for reading! ♥

boyfolk February 3 2010, 04:41:46 UTC

Ahh, this is absolutely lovely. I love the pacing and Jonghyun's quiet desperation. You've captured Key really well here I think. ♥♥

redcottonstar February 8 2010, 14:19:58 UTC

tysm! ♥ :)

pixziestikxz February 3 2010, 05:19:49 UTC

awwww~ ♥

I agree with the rest. This is amazing and just. sdfsdgfdh. ♥

sorry for my incoherency~

redcottonstar February 8 2010, 14:20:14 UTC

haha thank you~ glad you liked :D

unodoseskimo February 3 2010, 06:04:09 UTC

That was so, so, so gorgeous.
I absolutely adore your writing style, it has this amazing rythm and flow. C:
I also loved how you captured the difference between 'Key' and Kim Kibum, and Jonghyun's softer side.
Quite simply, I loved it. ♥♥

redcottonstar February 8 2010, 14:20:40 UTC

:') thank you!

springsunflower February 3 2010, 06:29:35 UTC

This was so beautiful, but a little sad I think ;_;
Some of my favorite quotes:
This is the Kibum he fell in love with.

If it isn't okay, Jonghyun will make it okay. This is how it's always been.
Kibum crying always breaks my heart ;-;
Kibum feels like part of Jonghyun's imagination. But Jonghyun cannot do anything except wait.
Poor Jjong... ;-;
I'll stop here before I quote all of it.. so.. You wrote both of them very well~ I really, really liked it ;-;

redcottonstar February 8 2010, 14:20:55 UTC

thank you for liking ;___; ♥~