Yay! Another intense and thrilling chapter. I need a larger vocabulary soon. I almost feel bad for the Joker. Like in TDK when the boats ended up not blowing each other up. The disappointed look on his face is the first sign of insecurity he's shown and it makes him seem fragile all of a sudden. That's the image you created as well. Well done.
Also, I love your Alfred. I told another writer that there isn't nearly enough great Alfred in the fandom, and yours is truly in character. I can just picture that stiff British upper lip when he's miffed *G*
Yes, that's exactly what I wanted to stress; Joker unnerves people because he's not afraid of the usual things, so people assume he's fearless and emotionless. He also likes to think he is. He most definitely isn't completely fearless and without anxieties, his are just hidden and unusual. He doesn't mind losing control, but he doesn't like unforeseen outcomes happening, especially when it ruins his plans for fun.
There's another phobia happening at the same moment, but I can't reveal the details on that yet.
ALFRED NEEDS MORE LOVE. <3 I love his dry, British humor. Loony and I need to watch more episodes and get lovely ideas for him...
Agh, brilliant work, as always. I can't wait to see how this all ends. I keep refreshing all the Batman fic sites in the hopes that a new chapter is up.
Well, I can tell you up front that there will probably not be more than one-per-day, as we RP at night and then I fix up the text and (usually) post it the next morning/afternoon.
I am definitely enjoying this. Bruce's whole billionaire-playboy facade is always amusing, and Alfred was awesome as usual. Also: the cop who called Animal Control / shot the Joker with the tranquilizer gun was pretty badass. I hope we'll be seeing more of him...
Another brilliant chapter. ^_^ You created vivid images with that cell scene & the Joker losing control. I could just..see it. Awesoem writing, can't wait for more.
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Also, I love your Alfred. I told another writer that there isn't nearly enough great Alfred in the fandom, and yours is truly in character. I can just picture that stiff British upper lip when he's miffed *G*
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There's another phobia happening at the same moment, but I can't reveal the details on that yet.
ALFRED NEEDS MORE LOVE. <3 I love his dry, British humor. Loony and I need to watch more episodes and get lovely ideas for him...
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Ooooooooooooooh! You sneaky bastards, you.
YES HE DOES. DRY BRITISH HUMOR FTW
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....morning/afternoon my time. XD;
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