Fic: Paradox

Mar 13, 2007 16:33


Title: Paradox

Author: interpretthis

Fandom: Lost

Sin: Greed

Pairing: Ben/Juliet

Rating: G

Summary: Set during 3x07.  Ben’s POV on "allowing" (*coughcough*) Juliet to go home.
Notes: For Read more... )

7_deadly_sins_, fic challenges, ben/juliet, drabble, lost fic, lost, fic

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skinny_bacon March 14 2007, 00:01:33 UTC
*bows down and kisses your toes*

Have I told you lately that I love you? Because (as Hurley would say), DUDE!!! This is so amazingly supercooly hauntingly tragically beautiful in every way all those adjectives could possibly imply. STUNNING! Like I am in complete awe of you and just want you to write write write so I can bask in the rewards of your efforts except that sounds so greedy but wow is it true because you are amazing.

My life has become a mess of knotted threads, at the heart of which lies a conflict of interests starting with my life and ending with hers.
This is totally Ben. Lyrical and yet still to the point.

The monster inside me is insatiable. It will stop at nothing to grasp for and hold all it can get, starting with my life and ending with hers.
I like the implication here that Ben himself sometimes feels captive to the monster inisde him.

The knot would unravel, but so would I.
Awww, poor Ben. I just want to Hug you.

She will stay. I will live. She will learn to be happy. She will learn to be happy for me.
So dead on with how I see Ben.

Wow. Well, I think this rant is long enough. Amazing. So so amazing. *super big hugs*

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interpretthis March 14 2007, 00:11:03 UTC
Have I told you lately that I love you? Because (as Hurley would say), DUDE!!! This is so amazingly supercooly hauntingly tragically beautiful in every way all those adjectives could possibly imply.
Hee. Love you too. And love your adjectives as well ;)

Thank you so, so much! I have no adjectives to express how wonderful you and all of your comments are, so I'll leave it at that. *super big hugs back*

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