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insanction

[03.] amorphous

Feb 22, 2012 00:00

[03.] amorphous
kevin learns what it's like getting looked through || kevin/kibum || g

( Kevin’s never really known what it was like to be one of the people who got looked through. )

c: kevin, r: g, c: kibum, f: u-kiss, p: kevin/kibum, f: xing

Comments 5

nicolochy February 20 2012, 17:30:03 UTC

Just an intro before the actual comment: I was reminded of my term paper when I read the title of your fic. It's about amorphous substances.
Anyway.. At the end I wanted to say out loud "Doesn't feel so good, does it?"
Although always compared to his brother, I feel Kibum is actually someone who can keep reinventing himself.
Nicely written.

insanction February 20 2012, 17:53:48 UTC

i see, that's interesting! i thought amorphous would fit well because it means to be formless, having no shape, having no character, easily seen through -- exactly the reason it fits kibum, because he's able to change and adapt. and no, definitely doesn't feel so good. thanks for your feedback ♥

s2_otter February 22 2012, 22:48:26 UTC

I don't think I quite get the end but I somewhat do.
I mean I think I'm inferring something that wasn't what you planned and all :S
But this was really nicely written. I always thought of Kevin as someone who shone and probably never knew how it's like to be shone by someone's limelight (or that sort)
It's so angsty though, /sighs.

insanction February 23 2012, 03:34:12 UTC

oh just curious, what were you thinking about the ending? (i meant for it to be a suggestion that after kibum left from xing and xing goes downhill that kevin doesn't cruise through anymore with his 'success' and spot as the face of the group, getting looked over, but i'm not sure how well that came across ;;)

anyhow, u-kiss is just such an angsty group to me ;; thanks for reading ♥

s2_otter February 26 2012, 02:55:36 UTC

Sorry for getting back to you so late, but because I'm such a Kemaru shipper, I thought it was more of Kibum "looking through" Kevub being there, caring about him for him and that would link to the quote where Kevin's no longer alive if even the one that "could keep him alive (OKAY I KNOW I'M SUCH A KEMARU SHIPPER)" made him "dead".

But the thing about the theme here about being looked through is that I feel it in my veins.
Feels like no one sees me and that I'm invisible to the eyes because I've been neglected a lot these days :(

I know right, sometimes too much smiles and laughter makes us think what they might be hiding behind them :S

<3 Thanks for sharing~