"So Fine" (To the Ends of the Earth, Charles/Edmund, PG-13)

[innie_darling]

And here's another Porn Battle fill. It's for To the Ends of the Earth.

prompts: regard, bath, yearning, unrequited, teach

Comments

[lydia_petze]

I think this is a gorgeous little character piece. I need to re-watch TTEOTE now :)

[innie_darling]

Thank you so much! In my apartment, it's always the right time to rewatch TtEotE!

[oxoniensis]

I love seeing Edmund through Charles' eyes here, Charles so longing, and at the same time so humble and self-deprecating. One of the many things I loved about him.

[innie_darling]

Charles is so willing to stand up to Edmund at first that the way he starts effacing himself and getting moony over Edmund is always a delightful surprise. Man, I love the idea of Edmund walking around all unconsciously beautiful and Charles just yearning for him. Mmmm.

Thank you - for the prompts, the battle, and the feedback!

[kate_lear]

You had me at the mention of BC's thighs...

This is utterly, utterly gorgeous. Charles' longing really comes across, and the way this flows is just lovely.

[innie_darling]

Now I want to write loooooong fic with Edmund being confused into lust by Miss Granham, being pined after by Charles, and then longing for Marion. Mmmmm, those thighs.

[kate_lear]

Oh dear, this is such a late reply (*glares at work*) but I just had to drop you a note to say that this made me think of Helen of Troy, 'the face that launched a thousand ships'. Benedict's thighs - the legs that launched a thousand fanfics...??

[innie_darling]

I think that is a perfectly fair statement. But there's nothing about Edmund that I don't love - he's such an amazing character.

[embroiderama]

Oh wow, this is quite delicious.

[innie_darling]

That's definitely one word for Edmund! Mmmmmm!