Within Without: Part 4 (Gil/Nick)

Jul 31, 2005 20:12

Title: Within Without: Part 4 (of 4 ( Read more... )

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janissa11 August 1 2005, 01:08:28 UTC
Crying. God damn it, I never cry, but I am. Aw damn it, this is so fucking wonderful. I can so see it, see it ALL.

Okay. *wipes face* You rock, woman. You rock SO FUCKING HARD. This is brilliant.

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eleanor_lavish August 1 2005, 12:02:41 UTC
*hugs you tight* Thank you. So. Much. *hugs again*

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starry_midnight August 1 2005, 01:10:01 UTC
I love you. I really can't even begin to leave a worthy review right now, I'm still far too much in the wow and awe stage. Anyway, yes, I love you and I love this and I will properly review later. :)

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eleanor_lavish August 1 2005, 12:03:20 UTC
lol! Can't wait for more, but any fb that starts with "i love you" is pretty awesome. *grin*

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caribbeanblue August 1 2005, 02:07:32 UTC
Not quite crying, but near enough to it. Twisted and tender by turns, I'm going to have to bookmark this one for future rereads and recs. Well bloody done.

*gives a standing ovation*

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eleanor_lavish August 1 2005, 12:04:16 UTC
*takes a bow* This story took a HELL of a lot out of me. My next one will be the fluffiest fluff ever to fluff.

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mb_tech_net August 1 2005, 02:15:47 UTC
Whooo! Okay, that pinky toe nail can and will stay it's moment of cursing. Whooo! Mmm! That's .... it's .... Wow! You are worthy. You are so worthy. Words cannot express at this time your worthiness and my speechlessness. Mmmm *shaking head, awestruck*

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mb_tech_net August 1 2005, 14:27:46 UTC
I recently read this and it seemed fitting to the story.

Isaiah 40:27-31

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ink_like_blood August 1 2005, 15:36:00 UTC
I'm right with you on "soar on wings of eagles" but then I drift to equating Gil with God and I think I'm pretty much damned. *wink*

Thanks for all the sweet words about the story-- I'm so glad you enjoyed it!!

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kalimyre August 1 2005, 02:35:06 UTC
Okay, this? Made me cheer out loud. Yay Nicky! I'm so very happy for him, overcoming everything, making it. When Brass came and said the guard woke up and Nick was in the clear, oh, I understood why he started crying. And Gil! Gil was wonderful throughout, patient and so much in love and wanting to do the right thing but not quite sure how. Yay for Nick and Gil! And for Nick's new job, how perfect is that? So perfect. Out in the open air every day, all about birds and flight and, well, freedom.

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ink_like_blood August 1 2005, 15:53:11 UTC
If Gil knew how from the beginning, he wouldn't be Gil. The Ranger thing was one of those eureka moments. I mean, could you go back to being a CSI after that? And he gets a uniform! Rowr.

Thanks for the lovely feedback!!

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