WTR #27: Provocation (Hermione/Teddy)

[inell]

Title: Provocation (Worth the Risk #27)
Pairing: Hermione/Teddy
Summary: Hermione goes to a surprise party and gets surprised.
Word Count: 7435
Rating: Teen
Betas: florahart & heather11483
Note: This contains spoilers for Deathly Hallows. Previous chapters of Worth the Risk can be found here .

Comments

[alissomora]

OMG yay! I was just about to go to bed, but guess I'll be staying up now :D

[alissomora]

Oh, Hermione :( I completely empathise with Ted. He has been patient and understanding and he's right -- Hermione is being selfish by only allowing him to do what she wants and not really considering his feelings. I mean, I understand she's a mother and she has other people to consider, but Teddy has feelings, too. It's a sad situation for them both and I really hope they work it out because I've really grown to love them, and their relationship together, in this story. I'd hate to see them not work out in the end.

And this line: To illustrate his point, he grows his ears abnormally big before he shrinks them back totally cracked me up!

If you have Y!M and you're around, please buzz -- asplashofink ♥

[florahart]

Hahaha. This was pretty much my POV as teh beta, too. Me: Hermione! Careful is good but you're making him CRAZY! He has risk TOO you silly chica!

[alissomora]

You know, I kinda wonder if Hermione has stopped to think about what Ted is risking, too -- I don't think she really has. She's made her lists, as she's wont to do, but I think some part of her brain really hasn't processed what he's risking too. Harry is a big part of both their lives and Ted must be anxious about his godfather's reaction. The fact that *he* is willing to make it public shows he's more mature than she is, in some way.

I think I'm thinking way too much about this story and these two! :D

[lilbreck]

This was painful. Brilliant work!

[inell]

Thank you, hon! ♥

[secretsolitaire]

Yeah, I'm siding with Teddy too at this point. Hopefully this will give Hermione a little kick in the pants.

[inell]

Thank you, hon! And haha. Yeah, it might. ♥

[peppery_lime]

~heart breaks for them~ I trust you. I really do. but still...~whimpers~

[inell]

Thank you! ♥

[pinktribechick]

Yes, I am still here, reading . . . I just haven't had much time to reply or anything recently. I worked pretty much every day last week - with very little time to myself.
Anyway - it's still rocking . . . and I know these two will find their way to each other eventually. Keep up the great work, and as always, more soon please! 8~D
~ptc~

[inell]

Hey you! Sorry you're working so much, but I'm glad you're enjoying it! ♥