WTR #27: Provocation (Hermione/Teddy)

[inell]

Title: Provocation (Worth the Risk #27)
Pairing: Hermione/Teddy
Summary: Hermione goes to a surprise party and gets surprised.
Word Count: 7435
Rating: Teen
Betas: florahart & heather11483
Note: This contains spoilers for Deathly Hallows. Previous chapters of Worth the Risk can be found here .

Comments

[alissomora]

OMG yay! I was just about to go to bed, but guess I'll be staying up now :D

[alissomora]

Oh, Hermione :( I completely empathise with Ted. He has been patient and understanding and he's right -- Hermione is being selfish by only allowing him to do what she wants and not really considering his feelings. I mean, I understand she's a mother and she has other people to consider, but Teddy has feelings, too. It's a sad situation for them both and I really hope they work it out because I've really grown to love them, and their relationship together, in this story. I'd hate to see them not work out in the end.

And this line: To illustrate his point, he grows his ears abnormally big before he shrinks them back totally cracked me up!

If you have Y!M and you're around, please buzz -- asplashofink ♥

[florahart]

Hahaha. This was pretty much my POV as teh beta, too. Me: Hermione! Careful is good but you're making him CRAZY! He has risk TOO you silly chica!

[alissomora]

You know, I kinda wonder if Hermione has stopped to think about what Ted is risking, too -- I don't think she really has. She's made her lists, as she's wont to do, but I think some part of her brain really hasn't processed what he's risking too. Harry is a big part of both their lives and Ted must be anxious about his godfather's reaction. The fact that *he* is willing to make it public shows he's more mature than she is, in some way.

I think I'm thinking way too much about this story and these two! :D

[inell]

Thank you, honey! I'm really pleased that you're enjoying the story so much. ♥