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indira14

So, I come with porn... I think.

Aug 12, 2010 09:04

So I just handed in my sn_exchange assignment a little before last week, and have been on a break from LJ ever since. It's refreshing, to say the least. Anyway, I discovered that lately I've been failing quite miserably at writing porn.

( This way to the sexy meme. )

fanfiction, meme, character: orochimaru, fandom: naruto, nejihina, character: hinata, character: sasuke, character: naruto, practise, drabbles, character: sakura, orosasu, yaoi, narusaku, character: shino, shinohina, sasusaku, sasunaru, one-shots., pairings, smut, het, character: neji

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ada_kensington August 13 2010, 00:08:37 UTC

I'm not on your flist, but don't freak out. I came here through syrraki's LJ. The mention of OroSasu was a red rag to a bull, lol.

Just have to say that I loved it - your OroSasu one-shot, I mean. It was beautiful - in a cold, brutal and unforgiving way, but that's how I always like it. If someone can write a situation that is horrendously awful in a way that's beautiful, I can admire that. You pulled it off. Kudos! :) Your Oro was awesome (vain, eloquent, spoiled, psychotic) and your Sasuke was spot on (insolent, stand-offish, revenge-retarded). There were some awesome lines and images in here too.

"Orochimaru was a genius. But he was also vain."

Great line to start a new section with. Short and to the point; brutal, like Oro and the whole messy situation Sasuke has found himself in. It also manages to sum up a whole lot about Oro as a character. Nice...

"Orochimaru had always had a certain fondness for lost, hungry strays."Again, awesome because it is true, and tragic because Oro is a psychopath and we all know what ( ... )

ada_kensington August 13 2010, 00:13:43 UTC

Oh no wait, I came here through the OroSasu community. I saw syrraki's user name above and thought "Derrrrrp... well, must've come from there!" Clearly, I am a dumbass. XD

indira14 August 13 2010, 01:04:52 UTC

The moment you mentioned Sarah Tree, I checked out your profile I stalk people in my spare time, you see and- I. Wow. I knew the name looked familiar. Like syrraki, I always thought the author of A Day in the Life was a guy, because their writing styles seem to be more 'solid' or 'concentrated', and generally tend to be more straightforward, but- this is a pleasant surprise.

Before I reply to your other comment, I should tell you that your OroSasu stories were what got me into the pairing in the first place. I don't know why I chose to venture into the OroSasu fandom (there was jut something so appealing and twisted about it...), but I'm glad I did.

I think I'll go read the rest of ADitL now (I'm still reading through chapter 36)

Now, excuse me while I hyperventilate.

syrraki August 13 2010, 10:06:08 UTC

(I totally spent the weekend rereading ADitL. Ada, I didn't mention it to you because I think my adoration of the fic has gone past flattering and into sort of creepy.)

indira14 August 13 2010, 01:50:13 UTC

Ahem, so I'm coherent enough to reply again.

I'm glad you think it's 'beautiful' - that's quite a compliment. Writing Orochimaru proved to be a challenge at first - it took me a while to even get a glimpse inside his head, and to do that, I had to write down all the qualities I associated with our dear villain, 'genius' and 'vain' being two of many.

I think out of all the seven oneshots I've written, I was most enthusiastic about this one (SasuSaku and ShinoHina are a close second).

Oro is a psychopath and we all know what he does with his lost, hungry strays. - That we do. Is it bad that I love Oro for being the psychopath he is? I do remember being pissed off when Kishimoto started to emasculate the guy, and then killed him off altogether! Seriously, he had the potential to be the greatest evil-doer of all time! :'( Naruto just... isn't the same without him.

This one was really creepy (in a good way) because I had visions of that infamous scene in Silent Hill 2 when Pyramid Head does something pretty fucking nasty... - I'm to ( ... )

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