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demi/selena - i hear a word you're not saying (oneshot)

Jul 21, 2009 18:22

Title: I Hear a Word You're Not Saying
Character/Pairing: Demi/Selena (femslash)
Word Count: ~1,950
Rating: PG, I guess
Summary: They’re both so quiet, not knowing what to say or if they even have anything to talk about at all. The Princess Protection Program premiere and prom
Disclaimer: This is entirely fictitious and I don't own anything. Title ( Read more... )

type: fic, ship: demi/selena, fandom: disney

Comments 8

lastchance_197 July 21 2009, 23:50:24 UTC

And Demi feels like she may vomit, its junior high all over again, only worse somehow.

-- From this point on I felt like crying.

This was so beautifully written, and so emotional *tears*

BUT -- I lol'd at the beard part! Hahahaha

kittyspotneko July 22 2009, 00:44:07 UTC

aww poor demi. if i EVER heard ANYONE say that about either of them, id sooo kick that persons ass. even if demi/selena werent there id STILL kick the persons ass lol. thats true, we dont just like demi, we LOVE her haha. i loved it it made me smile at the end. more? please? pretty please? dont make me beg

frostygrl July 22 2009, 02:05:16 UTC

omg beautiful <3

i love how selena knew that demi really meant she loved her in a non friendly way <2

xxalynaj July 22 2009, 02:18:23 UTC

This was beautiful.. Your writing is phenomenal.
I laughed at the end. :) Too clever.
And it was absolutely adorable.

coffeecommunity July 22 2009, 02:54:51 UTC

Yay, two updates from you in one day! I love the way you've recreated the typical "girl crying in the high school bathroom" scene here, and did so beautifully. Demi hearing the taunts and whispers at the prom is so sad, but well-written enough to show Demi that no matter how far she runs, they'll always be there. It's so sad, but Selena shows that she'll always be there too, that she'll never be able to outrun Selena. I'm also intrigued by the concept that neither girl can pinpoint a distinct thing that went wrong, but that somehow a rift grew over time that they couldn't shake. It actually seems to be the most accurate of anything I've read.

The contact with Selena has her heart racing again, but for entirely different reasons. And all she wants to do is kiss her best friend. But this isn’t truth or dare when they were fourteen years old, this is different, this is real. I love this, because I'm so convinced that something like this happened in real life.

She hates seeing her best friend look so distraught, it kills her and all ( ... )