veni vidi vici; pg; jessica & krystal

Dec 29, 2010 16:33

veni vidi vici 
jessica, krystal, sister!fic

beautiful girls, all over the world )

c: krystal, f: snsd, f: f(x), c: jessica, r: sfw

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bollywoodrecord December 29 2010, 23:15:59 UTC
Oh, wow.... This was intense. Jung sister stories are always my favorite, you know? I LOOOOVE reading them. :D Anyways...

Pause. Am I supposed to be confused or am I just a total and oblivious idiot? Sorry... I mean, I get most of it, I think it just has to be spelled out for me to understand, you know? Sorry, again, but don't worry. It was still love. :D THANKS FOR WRITING!!

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incessance December 30 2010, 14:48:53 UTC
what are you confused by? :p i hope you still enjoyed the story, though. thank you for commenting!

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bollywoodrecord December 30 2010, 17:00:57 UTC
Kind of the last part of the story. Like, Krystal transfers because she thinks she's going to get Amber to come back? And why was Jessica yelling at her for what she did? And the last line too.

I guess in all, I'm just wondering what Krystal did to piss Jessica off and why Jessica left.

Haha, thank you for writing again, sorry I couldn't understand the whole thing...

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cagallisakura December 30 2010, 08:34:51 UTC
Damn okay this is definitely worth commenting on.

I thought it was weird that Krystal didn't mention Amber when she was talking about her members. I was going to ask about that in my comment actually and then I kept reading and understood.

Is the reason why Krystal didn't get a callback from the audition because she didn't even bother going to it?

The last line though, that I don't quite get :/

I also love how you use the real names for the f(x) members <3

Please write more and sorry for the long comment ^^;

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incessance December 30 2010, 14:55:46 UTC
i appreciate long comments a lot, don't be sorry!

when saying krystal didn't get a callback, i was trying to get across that her facial expression betrayed her (and thus, her acting skills). the krystal that i wrote is really frustrated in terms of her career and personal life: she feels that her sister and her bandmate have abandoned her and she's searching for identity.with the last line, what i was going for was that, even though krystal's switching schools was not specifically to get amber (or jessica) to come back to her, she framed it that way out of anger and frustration during her argument with jessica. in fact, what it really does is the opposite- it pushes her sister away out of sorrow and defiance. in essence, the same thing krystal was dealing with, she pushed onto jessica, which is supposed to be another play on the theme of this.

i should probably write a note explaining all of this better (:

thanks for reading anyway!

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chikaon08 December 30 2010, 18:19:41 UTC
This was intense! I love Jung sister angst and they're so much fun to read. I really liked how you left it really vague as to what the problem was and slowly revealed it all the way to the end. At first, I wasn't even sure it was taking place in the world with them in f(x) and SNSD and thought it was AU haha. But yeah I could really feel the anger and just imagine it in my head. Kinda reminds me of arguments with my own sister heh. Oh bb Jung, why so rebellious XD.

I was a little confused as well, but I read your reply to another comment and I think I mostly got it. So by the last line, you meant that Krystal's stubbornness helped bring back Jessica because she doesn't go home for a long time and she'll think it'll do the same for Amber?

Anyway it was a really good read and I enjoyed it. :)

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incessance December 31 2010, 03:07:21 UTC
i'm going to write an explanation soon! just kind of busy with some other stuff at the moment, but it'll be up there. thank you so much for reading and commenting!

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incessance December 31 2010, 03:07:39 UTC
understanding=good (:

thanks for reading!

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albeitalways January 9 2011, 13:57:10 UTC
ho shit. this definitely blew me away. loved the way you write, you've mastered the show, not tell ♥

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