I noticed you've changed the names, but I think you missed one unless you're making "Taylor" a middle name? "...she will never be built like Cleo.” Taylor said in a mock..."
I always loved Cleo's off-the-wall fashion sense.
Your writing is, as always, spectacular. And I am going to continue to jump forward.
This could be because I'm tired, but I feel like the pacing in this chapter could be sped up a bit, I'll re-read it again tomorrow when I'm more fresh though, just to be sure :) As always, I love Cleo. I think what may be pulling at me is that we jump right in with the boys, when I almost feel like it might need the background we no longer have since they're not Hanson anymore? If that makes sense? Again though, I could be just slow because I'm so freakin tired.
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I always loved Cleo's off-the-wall fashion sense.
Your writing is, as always, spectacular. And I am going to continue to jump forward.
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