here are some poems i wrote about 2 weeks ago, click each link to read it... feel free to comment... ----------------------------------------------------- ( from the inside )
wow, reality sets in with that poem... ive been thinkin about exactly this kinda stuff lately yur words express a lot...props ~ mad props dude
a hole in my soul that just wont fill i throw in everything that i can search for people to make me feel alrite but they dont know what theyre getting into a laugh and a smile they used to make everything but now its just empty space inside of me and what could fill this void when i dont know what dug it out in the first place
gold, pure gold - the more i think about this part, the more i can relate...
Kewl poem, sounds more like a song, but I like it. Very deep. And I'm the first to comment Woo-hoo. Sorry, got excited, it happens. Forever and Always, Anda
"my indecision will be the destruction of me" seriously, the story of my life lies in that one line. your writings are so awesome, i'm speechless. have you ever thought about being a song writer or something? cause you would definitly go far with that. I hope you feel better...
much love, Nicolle ..sorry, don't have an lj, but i was looking around other people's and i found yours, so hope you don't mind me reading it :)
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ive been thinkin about exactly this kinda stuff lately
yur words express a lot...props ~ mad props dude
a hole in my soul that just wont fill
i throw in everything that i can
search for people to make me feel alrite
but they dont know
what theyre getting into
a laugh and a smile
they used to make everything
but now its just empty space
inside of me
and what could fill this void
when i dont know what dug it out
in the first place
gold, pure gold - the more i think about this part, the more i can relate...
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Forever and Always,
Anda
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seriously, the story of my life lies in that one line. your writings are so awesome, i'm speechless. have you ever thought about being a song writer or something? cause you would definitly go far with that. I hope you feel better...
much love,
Nicolle
..sorry, don't have an lj, but i was looking around other people's and i found yours, so hope you don't mind me reading it :)
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