Drabble: There

Jan 17, 2009 16:03

Title: There
Author: immortal_jedi
Rating: G
Prompt: 100 words for “What if” on potc100Summary: What if Calypso had been there ( Read more... )

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veronica_rich January 18 2009, 00:20:12 UTC
ACK, finally a happy what-if!

Of course, there'd be no need for the sequels as they stand. But I could live with a new plot and amended characterizations, if I really had to. *sigh* ;-)

I suspected Jones was more like Will when he was a younger man, BTW ...

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immortal_jedi January 18 2009, 00:25:13 UTC
Why do you think I wrote it? We need some happy What ifs!

Yeah, the sequels would be different, if the events happened at all... but interesting. (I've had some thoughts on that, but I don't know if they'll ever materialize into a story.)

I've thought for a while now that Jones probably saw a lot of himself in Will. And Jones probably was like Will, before betrayal and heartbreak made him choose to be the monster we see on screen.

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barbossamonkey January 18 2009, 01:07:53 UTC
I think the events probably would still have happened but Jones wouldn't be the cruel, malicious guy demanding 100 souls from Jack.

Jack probably would have still bargained with him, got the Pearl back, tried to avoid his fate, and inadvertantly hand over Jones heart to Beckett. *THEN* we might see cruel, malicious Jones because he'll blame Jack for everything gone wrong. :D Now thats a What if story for you :-p

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barbossamonkey January 18 2009, 01:08:22 UTC
Oh and Im certain Calypso would have been bound anyway. Fate and Destiny is funny that way.

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kyra_neko_rei January 18 2009, 02:01:17 UTC
Beautiful.

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immortal_jedi January 18 2009, 03:47:36 UTC
Thank you

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mary684 January 18 2009, 04:28:43 UTC
Nice! You're right, the prompt begs for happy endings and this one was perfect. Nice to imagine how many things could have been different if Jones was a satisfied man.

Now you've got me pondering happy endings...*g*

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immortal_jedi January 18 2009, 05:31:20 UTC
Oh yes, What if means we can change things for the better, if we want.

Things would be very different if Calypso had been there...

Do it, do it! Happy endings are a good thing!

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were_lemur January 18 2009, 05:27:12 UTC
Awwwww!

Yay happy!

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immortal_jedi January 18 2009, 05:32:54 UTC
Thank you, glad you liked it!

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pktaxwench January 18 2009, 14:09:47 UTC
Happy fluffy goodness.... yay! See? Isn't it nice to not kill Will? :-D

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immortal_jedi January 18 2009, 21:31:24 UTC
Glad you liked it- and I don't always kill Will!

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