Poetry Fix

[ilkee]

ENTRY  April 28

Because  hate is legislated . . . written into

the primer and testament,

shot into our blood and brain like vaccine or vitamins

Because our day of time, of  hours --- and the clock-hand turns,

closes the circle upon us; and black timeless nitght

sucks us in like quicksand, receives us totally ---

without a raincheck or a parachute, a key

Comments

[ilkee]

I like GE best too. I started at CG, but lately it seems like it takes forever to get chapters approved. Could just be me being impatient. But, since it's where I started, it will always kind of me like my first love.

[dynonugget]

I started at ff.net, and the volume of readership there is through the roof, though the quality of reviews tends to be lacking...depth, I guess. I recommend AFF and GE too.

[ilkee]

I got one chapter up at ff.net and I already see what you mean about the quality of reviews. Maybe when the story is complete I will post it there. In the meantime, I think I'm going to stick to the three I've got: AFF, GE, and CG. Thanks for the tips!

[dynonugget]

Try downloading ff.net's free odt word program. I use it and I like it just fine. You can also upload word documents there.