CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM

How well am I playing mah pups? :3 Please do tell me. If there's anything I'm doing right or wrong with the characterization, I'll be happy to take your critiques. ^^

I play the following:
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• Peter Pettigrew (peteytherat)
• Kingsley Shacklebolt (king_kingsley)
• Thorfinn Rowle (rock_n_rowle)

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• Zuko (hotfireworks)

Okay? Okay. ^^