WIP check-in

[igrockspock]

1. Pike/Number One the night he hands over command of the Yorktown to her. I know where I want the story to go, but writing from Number One's POV is hard. I think I've written more Pike/Number One in my head than on paper, but whether I recorded it or not, I've always narrated it from Pike's POV. Now I know why: he is far less prickly and self-

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[boosette]

Pike/Number One the night he hands over command of the Yorktown to her. I know where I want the story to go, but writing from Number One's POV is hard.

I so can't wait til this is good to go, since I did something with the premise myself but went in with Pike as narrator - because he's the talkier of the two, which is a huge reason why I didn't cross-post the story to WNW. And also it is one of my favorite scenarios ever.

[taraljc]

Pike/Number One the night he hands over command of the Yorktown to her.

YAYS!

*makes happy sounds of glee*

[rubynye]

So THAT was the joyful noise I heard to the West!