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Lick My Wounds - Doctor Who - Jack/Eleven - PG - Hurt and kind of banterish setos_puppy October 18 2011, 02:35:55 UTC
Jack's body is aching and everything inside of him wants to curl up and away. He never should have come to America. He never should have left Cardiff, where it was safe, and wet and only filled with aliens and not muggers with knives and stabbing, shooting pain.

He huddled down in the booth of the restaurant somewhere in Utah. It was dry outside, and hot. Very hot for how early into the spring-summer gap they were in. He wrapped his hand around the complimentary water and took a long, deep swallow. At least he wasn't bleeding anymore.

The door swung open and a man walked in. Jack tracked him with his eyes as he placed an order at the bar and then was delivered a fizzy drink and french fries. He took a bite of them before picking up the mustard and squeezing an unhealthy amount into the corner of the basket before ambling his way toward the booths.

He pauses by Jack's booth and gives him a once over. "What happened to you then?"

Jack's brow raises. The man has an Estuary accent. Rare in these parts of Utah. His heart twists painfully as he looks up at the young face. "How much time've you got?"

The man places his things on the Formica top and looked at the watch on his wrist. He frowned at it and flicked it. "Twenty minutes."

Jack grins, flashing too much teeth as he steals some fries from the basket and takes a bite out of them. "Only twenty minutes?"

"Places to go. People to see."

"Time and space."

The man looks down his nose at Jack and his mouth twists up. "Stop flirting."

Jack eases back into the vinyl booth, the action pulling jagged, sharp pains down his spine. "Can't help it. You're ripe, now."

Deep, soulful brown eyes roll and the Doctor drops into the booth across from Jack before picking up a mustard saturated fry and takes a bite. He contemplates on it before deeming it worthy. "So, who'd you piss off this time?"

I don't even know what this is *covers face*

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Re: Lick My Wounds - Doctor Who - Jack/Eleven - PG - Hurt and kind of banterish ienablu October 18 2011, 05:55:09 UTC
I don't even know what this is
GLORIOUS. THAT'S WHAT IT IS. The juxtaposition between Jack being in extreme pain and then Eleven getting a fizzy drink and french fries! Eleven's watch not working at first!

"Time and space."
The man looks down his nose at Jack and his mouth twists up. "Stop flirting."
Best Jack/Eleven exchange ever.

"So, who'd you piss off this time?"
No wait, that one is. This is all so fantastic, thank you so much. :D

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Re: Lick My Wounds - Doctor Who - Jack/Eleven - PG - Hurt and kind of banterish setos_puppy October 18 2011, 06:06:35 UTC
I'm so very glad you liked this! It just sort of plopped out of my brain.

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