Fic: Solum Patriae (Ronon-centric Teamfic) PG

[idyll]

Title: Solum Patriae
Characters: Ronon-centric gen teamfic
Rating: PG
Spoilers: References to Sateda
A/N: Many thanks to arsenicjade and tesserae_ for the fantastic beta work. Additional thanks to saturnalia for Latin assistance for the title.

Summary: Ronon watches his teammates' faces carefully when they first see what he's brought them here to show them. He wonders what

Comments

[larianelensar]

Oh! I liked this! It is a good tribute!

[idyll]

Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it.

[monniesgirl_65]

Thank You, this had me laughing out loud, the voices are spot on IMO and I love the ending.

[idyll]

Thanks so much, especially for menioning the ending as working for you, because I will admit to a bit of concern there.

[justhuman]

*thankyouthankyouthankyou* for showing us that deeper side of Ronan that's so very obviously *there*. Unfortunately, too many writers listen to Rodney and think that caveman is as deep as Ronan goes.

I love seeing the team from Ronan's pov, the respect he has for Teyla and the way he knows how to play with and placate his pack mates. The silent baiting of both Sheppard and McKay - *priceless*.

I also love that you didn't lose the team feel by sitting us behind Ronan's eyes. There was enough interaction between the other three to get the whole team-fic feel.

I adore your Ronan -- but I knew I would because he's in that "real boy" category with Gunn and Lindsey. I'm jealous because of the way those boys not only speak to you, but apparently move in, sack out on the couch and raid your fridge, just so you can get to know them better.

Let me tell you, when the nagging health issues got me up in the middle of the night, I wasn't expecting such a treat. Thanks.

[idyll]

No, thank you for the wonderful feedback. And you don't know how relieved I am that the dynamics weren't lost. I was very concerned about that and I'm glad it worked.

I'm sorry you're feeling poorly! Here's hoping you have a better night. *crosses fingers*

[wolfshark]

This was just... words fail. Brilliantly written!

[idyll]

Thank you muchly!!

[mikou]

This was awesome. I love that it featured Ronon and that you did such a lovely job of writing him and the different ways he interacts with each of his team and how they all interact with each other. I enjoyed the gentle humor and the concept of Ronon's surprise. Even though there was a hint of bittersweetness in the end, it left me smiling.

Great job all around.

[idyll]

Thank you! And it's funny, because I kinda view this as bittersweet overall (and wrote it with that intent), so it took me a while to realize that all the interaction I put in there actually lightens the tone. Not an unpleasant realization, but it still makes me go "huh" to see people commenting about it being amusing. Hee.