So, a bit of background about this novel. I've been writing this for about 7 years now. The basic plot is that the two main characters haven't seen each other in about 20 years. They were best friends before, but since Seres was forced to become the Caretaker of the Multiverse (the Alezrani), he cut all contact with Wolf. Now, 20 years later, the ( Read more... )

This is part of the really long project I'm working on. Hiram is the head of the Collective, the ruling body of the multiverse and he has come to make a man called Wolf an offer. Any and all feedback you can give me would be wonderful. I have no idea why I wrote this in present tense.
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This is at the beginning of that really long story I'm working on. The head of the Collective, Hiram, the group that oversees the various populations in the multiverse, shows up at Wolf's door. He then tells him that he's been chosen to become the caretaker of the multiverse, the Alezrani. What the caretaker does is to untangle and prevent the ley ( Read more... )

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 I feel like I should post the next couple of chapters, but I have midterms....I'll post after next week, because then it's Spring Break! Yay!

The next chapter! If you're reading this, leave a comment please!

Present; after chapter 1

He led them into the kitchen and gestured for Wolf to have a seat."Do you want anything to drink? Eat?"
Wolf shook his head, "No, thank you" Seres nodded and sat across from him. Wolf glanced around the kitchen. It was medium-sized. A dangling, glass, cone ( Read more... )

 20 years before Present

Seres struggled, bound by spellrope in the circle. The Collective glanced around him and through him; they refused to look at him directly. He looked up, scanning the chamber. No escape routes. He frowned; there was someone missing-Wolf. He didn't even show up. Hiram paced in front of him, watching the clock on the far wall ( Read more... )

 Again a  pain to format.  I have to edit this.

Six months after present; six months in the future

Located at what used to be the edge of the meteor belt, Galaia was an almost barren planet. The meteor belt had expanded to include the debris of the other planets in the Galaian system. The bolygó had destroyed every planet except Galaia. On Galaia, it ( Read more... )

All of the chapters are in a non-linear format
Present
The coffee shop, Esnatzen, was empty when Seres walked in; the moss green carpet, filled with static, shocked his feet. He glanced around, eyes resting on the large tables in the center of the shop. He didn't feel like sitting down, although the orange and black armchairs looked comfortable. ( Read more... )