SGA FanFic: Two kinds of tears - Sparky

Dec 26, 2006 01:36

This was written for challenge #36 on sg_challenges.
It's technically 68 words too long for the challenge. But I could not bring myself to shorten it anymore.

Disclaimer: None if these characters are mine. They are property of MGM.
Summary: Her arm's wrapped around her knees she started to cry.
Prompt Word: Tears
Length: 1068 words
Rating: PG
Category: Romance ( Read more... )

john sheppard, stargate atlantis, fanfiction, weir/sheppard, elizabeth weir

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miss_izzles December 26 2006, 21:24:02 UTC
*squeeeeeeee*

this.was.awesome!!! excellent writing, very emotional - made me all sad at the beginning and gleeing with happiness at the end. :]

if this is the result, me and the plot bunnies are going to co-conspire to make you write more fantastic stories!

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icecream_junkie December 26 2006, 22:18:10 UTC
*lol* I'm glad you liked it. I really thought I wouldn't be able to write romance like this anymore since all the other stories I wrote recently where angst or death fics. ^^
But this story just worked out fine. Took me just about an hour to write (including checking my dictionary for words I could not remember and re-reading it).

if this is the result, me and the plot bunnies are going to co-conspire to make you write more fantastic stories!
Seems like I'm helpless against that. *looks slightly scared* But could you just do me a favour and do it while I have a break from university? Everytime between February and the end of March is fine. *lol*

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miss_izzles December 26 2006, 22:29:24 UTC
well i encourage you to write saprky romance with happy-endings!

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icecream_junkie December 26 2006, 22:41:51 UTC
I know you love that. *lol*
I'm just really more of an angst girl myself. Although since I started it, there might be more happy ending romance in the future.
I actually thought about writing a sequel or 2nd chapter to this story. We'll see. Maybe I'll write it during semester break.

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icecream_junkie January 1 2007, 14:51:44 UTC
First of all thanks for your comment. It's rare to get an honest review and I really appreciate it. After all without constructive criticism I can't improve my writing ( ... )

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