Oh, thanks! I'm really glad you like it. This is like.... the first original story I've ever finished on my own (without co-writer or extra help and stuff), so I was really nervous about it. :)
As for babystar-- yeah, I wonder as well. I'm tempted to either do a sequel or find some way to expand on this world somewhat.
Oh, wow. This is an awesome, awesome story. I adore the writing style, and the worldbuilding which you drop in through allusions. Also? Agent is insanely hot, in a strange, genderfucked way. I really like the ending, though I also would love to see what happened to Babystar. This is an amazing story, and I love the vivid little details of it. Great job!
Oh man, super late reply. Sorry! It didn't occur to me to check back and see if anyone posted a reply. *feels bad*
Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed the story-- like I said in a previous reply, it's my first longish-finished-and-actually-submitted story, so I'm just ecstatic that people seem to like it. Yes, I agree that Agent is dead hawt. Heheh. And not just because I wrote her! Oh, if I could write some sort of Further Adventures with her, and Babystar, and Face, I totally would! Ideas are already half percolating!
re Allusions: Oh god. This is where I really wish I had learned me my English from teachers that actually taught the technical stuff, rather than the experimental/conceptual creativity types so that I don't get so confused when confronted with a technical term I'm pretty certain I know. I think I vaguely know what you mean, and...uh, thanks. I worked hard! *two thumbs up*
This is brilliant and I hope you have a zillion more comments somewhere else on it. Or something. I've read it half a dozen times and just now realized I'd never commented. It kind of blows away everything else going on in my head, including intentions of commenting... terrible excuse, but yeah. And I don't really have anything else to say; I can only repeat, "Wow. ...wow. Yeah. Wow."
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He buries his face in her damp, black hair. "You better be worth it," he whispers. He smells apples.
for some reason i really like that line. one of a lot of lines i like.
i wonder what happened to babystar though.
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As for babystar-- yeah, I wonder as well. I'm tempted to either do a sequel or find some way to expand on this world somewhat.
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and i've never actually finished an original story either. so i'm envious ;]
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I'd love to see a sequel. XD
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Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed the story-- like I said in a previous reply, it's my first longish-finished-and-actually-submitted story, so I'm just ecstatic that people seem to like it. Yes, I agree that Agent is dead hawt. Heheh. And not just because I wrote her! Oh, if I could write some sort of Further Adventures with her, and Babystar, and Face, I totally would! Ideas are already half percolating!
re Allusions: Oh god. This is where I really wish I had learned me my English from teachers that actually taught the technical stuff, rather than the experimental/conceptual creativity types so that I don't get so confused when confronted with a technical term I'm pretty certain I know. I think I vaguely know what you mean, and...uh, thanks. I worked hard! *two thumbs up*
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