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downclouds June 6 2007, 23:09:58 UTC
wow. just wow. a little sad and a little hurtful and genderfucked and hopeful.

He buries his face in her damp, black hair. "You better be worth it," he whispers. He smells apples.

for some reason i really like that line. one of a lot of lines i like.

i wonder what happened to babystar though.

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diamond_dazzler June 7 2007, 01:54:00 UTC
Oh, thanks! I'm really glad you like it. This is like.... the first original story I've ever finished on my own (without co-writer or extra help and stuff), so I was really nervous about it. :)

As for babystar-- yeah, I wonder as well. I'm tempted to either do a sequel or find some way to expand on this world somewhat.

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downclouds June 7 2007, 01:56:37 UTC
lol well i'd be super psyched if you did!

and i've never actually finished an original story either. so i'm envious ;]

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lacewood June 7 2007, 08:58:50 UTC
Supposed editorial neutrality aside, I thought your story was awesome. XD (Francesca Lia Block references! Meet cyberpunk! Meet genderfuck!)

I'd love to see a sequel. XD

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diamond_dazzler June 7 2007, 12:12:19 UTC
Thanks! I love making references to things-- usually music or media -- but... Who's Francesca Lia Block? XD And she does stuff like this?

Ahah. I'm still debating between a novella version or a sequel-sequel.

Are you still doing the genderbending theme? Cos, if you are... I got ideas ideas!

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lacewood June 7 2007, 16:20:40 UTC
Well, not exactly. XD Francesca Lia Block is a writer, and I thought you'd referenced her because she has a series of books where a character is LITERALLY called Secret Agent Lover Man. Also, BabyStar is totally a name I could see her coming up with. XD

We're definitely still doing the genderbending/crossdress theme, but it'll probably be next year, since we have the other themes for this year pretty settled. XD; (I have more ideas for crossdressing than I have for... all the other themes together orz I'm so sad)

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