Never Did Run Smooth, Ch. 27

Mar 13, 2010 01:22

Rattrap has managed to get everybody pissed at him. Seriously, dude, can't you take a day off?

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slash, oh the drama, rattrap, dinobot

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blkdragonqueen March 13 2010, 06:45:11 UTC
O_O! The drama! The angst! The Drama! The Arguments! The Drama! The Desperation! The Drama! The suspense! The drama! (Saw your FFnet post ;p) Wow, you weren't kidding! Rhinox's non-confession! I didn't suspect his feelings for the resident saboteur ran that deep!

And the confrontation with Dinobot. Blood aside (and now I am rather hungry after that) it was interesting to see Rattrap approaching Dinobot as he would a live explosive. XD And then you had to go leaving us with that ending! D: AHHHH! I can't wait for the next part! I can't wait to see what happens next! Is it just Megatron or are other Predacons lurking about? The answers to all this and more next time in your wonderful story! (I hope! XD)

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ianam1983 March 13 2010, 21:51:28 UTC

I'm really not sure whether that was meant as an offer or a threat on his part. I'm not sure I want to know. Angry Rhinox is scary and hard to predict.

Yeeeah, I'm sitting on the answers till the next chapter. :P

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akisawana March 13 2010, 07:57:41 UTC


Silverbolt knows what love is.
Love is selfish, love is cruel. It envies, it boasts, it takes perverse pride in its control. It makes a man dishonorable, wrathful, forget what is important in this world. It tallies up the slights against a beloved, yea, even those from friends. It delights in the misfortunes of rivals and rejoices in the success of trickery. It always divides, always mistrusts, always surrenders, always despairs.
Love makes you fail.

WELL, RATTRAP'S IN CR. MUST BE TUESDAY.

Died happy. Died happy. Dude, you realize that if he kills you, that's going to put a damper on your sex life in general and really make it hard to get now-traumatized Ratbreath to pitch woo? Remember how hard it was the first time?

Rhinox, you're not supposed to make your friends cringe. I mean, that's like the exact opposite of the definition. And I ain't even touching the whole smacking around with a ten-foot treeRATTRAP, I BELEIVE YOU HAVE SET A NEW RECORD FOR "LONGEST AFTERGLOW." ROUND OF APPLAUSE FOR DINOBOT, EVERYONE, GIVE THE MAN WITH ( ... )

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ianam1983 March 13 2010, 21:19:29 UTC

Well, Silverbolt would know. He's banging a spider.

I don't blame Rhinox for his concerns. I am less than thrilled at how he's expressing them. Rattrap gets thrown around enough as it is. If it actually worked as everyone seems to expect, you'd think he'd have just stopped talking by now.

CR time does not really count. Nor does unconscious time. Which means his afterglow lasted about a minute and a half, then was cut short by Rhinox. But I don't blame Dinobot for that.

(I prefer tree-sex to more snow. Seriously, bring on the spring. I'll deal with the allergies and the sunburn when they hit me -- which they will.)

Rattrap is a Grumpy Bear in general. So is his boyfriend.

Yeah, that was his official introduction to the new kid. As you can see, he's a bit jaded about the whole affair by now. It's not that Mimic wasn't friendly, just… personal space. Personal. Space.

Nobody can keep up with Mimic. At least not until we invent faster-than-light travel.

Dinobot's table manners make Rattrap queasy, so yeah ( ... )

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mechanagnome March 14 2010, 05:20:34 UTC
I see my prose leaning towards purple.

Dinobot x Purple Prose = OTP 4 LYFE. True story. *nodnod*

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mechanagnome March 13 2010, 20:46:22 UTC
THIS THING YOU DO. IT IS AMAZING.

I don't think Rattrap is in the CR nearly this much in the show, dispite all the shit he pulls. That would make Rattrap the ONLY Maximal in need of repairs because of epic friendly fire. Goddamn, Dinobot, you must be some sort of amazing to do that much damage to the untouchable Rat.

Rhinox. Rhinox. You must be channeling Tankor prematurely here or something. Not disagreeing with your views on him, but dayum, he's boarderline psycotic boyfriend here.

Granted, Rattrap proves he deserves to be smacked around for his callousness and flippant disregard for Rhinox's concern. "Least I woulda died happy." Shit Rat. Can you stop and think about someone other than yourself for like, two seconds? Even if it's not Rhinox, imagine how Dinobot would have felt, knowing he killed you ( ... )

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ianam1983 March 13 2010, 21:46:20 UTC

I use the chamber a lot, because that seemed to be their response in the show whenever somebody was more than mildly injured, and I… injure them a lot. Dinobot didn't actually tear him up that badly. It looked worse than it was, he passed out mostly because he was exhausted (he's been sleep-deprived for days), and Rhinox flipped out. So it sounds like more of an emergency than it actually was ( ... )

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sneere March 16 2010, 05:23:54 UTC
Seriously, how distracted are YOU when you can't hear, see, or otherwise sense a mech that size coming right for you and then standing RIGHT THERE long enough to hear your spark-felt confession of affection! XD

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