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Forever Yours 1/1 (Supernatural)

May 27, 2008 13:38

Forever Yours
By iamstealthyone

Summary: Dean knows this isn’t Sam’s idea of happily ever after, but still, he thinks Sam should be a little grateful. Drabble.

Characters: Dean and Sam.

Rating: PG-13 (Genfic).

Word count: 100

Disclaimer: Don’t own them. Not making money off of them.

Author’s notes: Written for the 100-ghosts prompt: happily ever after ( Read more... )

supernatural, drabble

Comments 75

innie_darling May 27 2008, 20:50:45 UTC

That is seriously creepy.

iamstealthyone May 28 2008, 00:52:55 UTC

That is seriously creepy.

*g* I just couldn't get the muse to do anything happy with that prompt. It insisted, "Dark and creepy! Dark and creepy!"

Thanks for reading. :)

tsuki_no_bara May 27 2008, 20:52:21 UTC

ok, now that is really creepy. yikes. (i mean that in a good way, tho.)

iamstealthyone May 28 2008, 00:53:49 UTC

I'm glad you liked the creepiness here. The muse was rather insistent on putting a dark spin on this prompt.

Thanks for reading. :)

embroiderama May 27 2008, 20:53:36 UTC

Oh, man! That gave me the shivers.

iamstealthyone May 28 2008, 01:33:14 UTC

Oh, man! That gave me the shivers.

I'm glad the creepy vibe I was going for worked for you. It's fun delving into dark, twisted Winchesters from time to time.

Thanks for reading!

kriptkeeper May 27 2008, 21:01:23 UTC

extremist!Dean scares me. A lot.

hands wrapped around the metal bars of his cell

Packs a gut-punch, this line.

Great job!

iamstealthyone May 28 2008, 01:46:15 UTC

I rather enjoyed putting a dark spin on this prompt, so it's good to hear it worked for you. :)

extremist!Dean scares me. A lot.

Dean doesn't understand why you think he's being extreme. He's just taking necessary precautions to keep his Sammy safe. *g*

I'm glad my take on Dean creeped you out. The first few drafts of this drabble were very different, in large part because I kept trying to write it from Sam's POV, but it just wasn't working. Once I switched to Dean's POV, it flowed much better.

Packs a gut-punch, this line.

It's fun having you point out that line, as the reveal in the original drafts was clunky, and this version felt much better to me.

Thanks for the kind feedback!

ignipes May 27 2008, 21:04:34 UTC

SAMMY INNA CAGE. \o/

iamstealthyone May 28 2008, 01:57:47 UTC

SAMMY INNA CAGE. \o/

*g* I had a feeling you'd approve. Now if Dean could just get Sam as excited as you about the idea, things would be much easier for the boys.

Thanks for reading. :)