Fanfiction for 7stages [Havoc/Mustang, NC-17]

[hysteric_blue]

Title: Their Shades Of Pale
Author: galuxkitty
Fandom: Fullmetal Alchemist
Pairing: Jean Havoc/Roy Mustang
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 5811
Warnings: Graphic sexual situations.
Disclaimer: Fullmetal Alchemist is the rightful property of Hiromu Arakawa. This is a fanwork written purely for both your entertainment and mine

Comments

[momebie]

What a nice way to start the morning. :) I love their interaction in this.

[ceasefire]

Thank you very much. ^_^

[raja815]

Oh, wow. Just... wow. You already know how much I've been enjoying this, but reading it all at once it really struck me just how absolutely amazing it is. :D There's such a great balance between humor and awkwardness and hotness...

I loved the entire thing, but some particular squee-worthy moments:

Drunk!Jean is so adorable that I want to pick him up and take him home with me. ^_^ And it was so sweet watching Roy take care of him.

Roy's sexual alchemy. HYDROGEN/CARBON/OXYGEN, the SLICK OT3!!! :D

The little mentions of their previous sexual histories. You always do this very well; I love that we get to see little flashes of their past. I always feel like I know Roy and Jean so much better after I read one of your fics. <3

[ceasefire]

Eeeeeeee, thank you ^_^ Your comments always make me so happy. XD

Drunk Jean is adorable; hopefully he's still this adorable every time he gets drunk, and not an angry!drunk or a sick!drunk.

ROY MUSTANG'S NEW TITLE: THE LUBRICANT ALCHEMIST.

^_^ I like including little things like that, yup. After all, I doubt they'd ever be each others' first times. XD Thank you~

*purrs* I know. Roy is just sex on legs, and it is a rather nice MI to think about.

XD Havoc hates Roy!spooge. Poor Havoc... I don't know why, because I would have thought that would have been more common that someone drinking it down like it was a milkshake....

^_____________^ ♥ It was my pleasure, my dear, and thank you once again.

[summerhorse]

*cracks up* The Lubricant Alchemist. He would be very much in demand (at least in my frakked up version of Amestris where everyone's doing everyone else all the time)!

I loved this fic, really. It was real- the akwardness is so adorable and all that much more believable. But really, they're both sex on legs so it's meant to be. And I really like your shades of white, I'd have a hard time coming up with those ;)

[ceasefire]

*snerks* The elements for making your basic water-basded lube are all made up of carbon, hydrogen and oxygen. Roy could transmute it easily for hours of slippery fun!

Thank you very much ^_^ They would be very awkward at the beginning, Havoc especially, but they'd warm up. And indeed, they are. ^_~. Thanks very much for that, too. ♥

[nomdeplume13]

Very hot lemon, and the fact that Havoc was drunk and uncoordinated didn't make it comical, but instead sexy because Roy had to take control. Nice. And the interaction was very realistic, and such a fluffy ending. I enjoyed this.

[ceasefire]

Thanks very much! That's what I was aiming for, so I'm glad it came through. My Roy never really subs, merely tops from the bottom. ;)
Thanks for that too, and thank you for reading! ^_______^

[chrstphrl]

Beautiful. I love Havoc's hesitance and Roy taking the lead and still bottoming. I also love them talking during sex. Makes it even hotter to me. I always know I can expect awesome work from you and this one does not disappoint. A lovely way to start the day.

[ceasefire]

Thank you. My Roy never truly subs; he's either topping or topping from the bottom. I think talk during sex is one of the most important things ^_^ Communication is the key! ♥ Thank you so very much for your kind comment.

[megganblack]

This one was cute as always. Those boys really belong to each other.

The drunk!Jean was really adorable as Raja mentioned. He's just too innocent. And I love him telling Roy that he wants to take it further. My face just melted away.

You made my day! <3

[ceasefire]

Thank you ^_^ They really do.

Heh, poor drunk!Jean, he's got a lot to learn... perhaps he'd learn quicker were he not drunk! >_>
^_^ Jean loves his Colonel too much to let him go.

Thank you, darling! :D